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以下是澳际留学为大家整理收集的最新2011GMAT机经整理,下面是2011GMAT作文机经整理,自2010年12月24日至2011年1月7日,GMAT作文AI篇,共36篇,希望对大家有用,澳际留学祝大家考试顺利!
30: In today’s fast-paced world, employers benit more from the energy and innovative younger workers than experienced and wisdom older workers.
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31:“Employees should keep their private lives and personal activities as separate as possible from the workplace.”
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提纲:
1, Personal activities should not be brought to one&aposs workplace since they can reduce one&aposs ficiency. Thinking about one&aposs private life can distract one from his or her work.
2, Talking about private life and doing personal activities can disturb other fellow workers.
3, It is inevitable for a person to think about his or her private life and to do some personal activities at the workplace. But an employee should do his or her best to focus on the work when at workplace.
1, it is true that employees can hardly only work like a machine, that is to say, inevitably, they may carry some personal emotions while working. Sharing the personal interests and activities moderately may help build the positive relationship among colleagues.
2, However, it is not a wise choice to let the employees to bring all their private life and personal activities to the workplace. 仍然举上面的例子来说,a mother worried about her child cannot ficiently focus on her task even if the deadline is coming. a girl who breaks up with her boyfriend during the work time will probably talk to other fellows about the bad emotion, which may have a potentially negative influence on the productivity of the staff. so on…
allow personal life to impinge upon their job performance or intrude on coworkers.(sample)
Optional words:
Separate/ isolate/ exclude
Thesis sentence: I agree with the author’s point of view towards the relationship between private life and work because bring private life to workplaces has many bad fects on both the one who does so and people around him.
View1: personal activities should not be brought to the workplace since they can reduce one’s ficiency.
Evidence:
View2: dealing with one’s personal affairs at the workplace will inevitably produce negative fects on other co-workers.
Evidence: Inspirer imitations thus affect the morale and productivity. Working atmosphere, morale, corporate culture.
View3: since sometimes problems of private life will catch people all the time, the supervisors should be more sensitive to their subordinator’s difficulties, and help them to handle them properly.
以下是澳际留学为大家整理收集的最新2011GMAT机经整理,下面是2011GMAT作文机经整理,自2010年12月24日至2011年1月7日,GMAT作文AI篇,共36篇,希望对大家有用,澳际留学祝大家考试顺利!
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