雅思写作范文:人性的贪婪和自私.

2017-08-07 作者: 221阅读

  雅思写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思的一个重要材料,因为雅思写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面这篇整理的雅思写作范文:人性的贪婪和自私,而这边雅思写作范文也是雅思考官推荐的高分范文,非常具有参考价值。

  Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Someone think that we must return to the olds, more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  We are in a selfish world today. We are so busy looking out for number one, so saturated by our own problems, our own issues and our own little and often petty concerns that we failed to see how all could grow and being benited by working together as a team. As far as I am concerned, the reason of the individual greed and selfishness were actually caused by the faster and faster development and more and more competition of the society.

  Some people yearn to return to the old and traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. According to them , people were more honest and warm-hearted and the manner of traditional treating each other was simple and selfless in the past.

  Personally, I do not support this view . Even in the past, greed and selfishness existed in our society. These two factors never disappeared since human have instinctive material needs, individual wants and desires would swell surely with the advances of life and society. Moreover, old tradition has its own limit and could only adapt for a certain period. I believe that the key point here is to create a better world is the way of formulating moral criteria and improving the spiritual education. For example, religions play a significant role in respect for the family and the community.

  To sum up, selfishness and greed cannot be avoided and eliminated, because they exist, more or less, in everyone’s heart, even sometimes they contribute to the prosperity. To control them depends on the well basic education from every part of our society, such as family, communities, academic institutions, etc.

  这篇讨论关于人性的贪婪和自私的雅思写作范文的全文,比较符合我们国家目前的国情,同时可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。

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