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GMAT作文机经整体来说受换库影响不是很大,但是还是会有一些新题的,考生朋友可以将最近两三个月的GMAT作文机经都拿出来看看,为此澳际小编特收集整理GMAT作文机经分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助。
【考古】10月JJ22
The following appeared in a presentation by the chi production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and ficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”
一个经理在一次会议说,他们公司的一家厂的drill bits一美元的成本能生产10个他们公司的其他的厂只能生产7个。所以为了减少成本,他们应该将所有的drill bits 的生产放到 那家厂,从而实现longterm goal。,因为降低部件成本是达到降低总体成本的唯一办法,所以这个举措能达到降低总体成本的目标
【参考思路】
这个argument 的思路绕来绕去就是有three mojor flaws: reduce costs by devoting entirely drill bit production to C; the only way to reduce costs is to reduce production costs; shifting the production of the other parts to other factories is the appropriate way to go
针对这三个 direct or indirect conlusions 写就行了
1: although C produce more bits per dollar, the reason may be that C has high- skilled workers, total new and high- quality machines, or less amounts of orders(订单) thus entirely shifting is fallacious, the results may be that the workers may be too tired and have too much burden, the machines would be worn out, and all this could contribute to the lowering of the productivity
2: the management assumes without further more evidence that reucing the productions costs is the only way to enhance cost -fective production process: 可以train workers , 引进new technologies, 定期维修老旧设备,提高management strategy...
3: 就是转移制造这一部分:也许转移制造之后 cargo and transporting fees would roar因为sporadically 分布的 工厂可以及时供货,集中在一个地方不利于 供货, 而且shifting 牵扯到 搬家的费用:那些cumbersome machine怎么转移啊,人员怎么迁移啊。。。这些都是huge expense, may not weighover the elevation of the productivity
以上就是1月份的GMAT作文机经部分,考生朋友可以根据文中的意思自己选择性练习,看自己拿到题目后是否会做,最后祝大家都能考出好成绩。
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