7月GMAT作文机经:Muscle Monthly.

2017-08-10 作者: 222阅读

  7月13日GMAT机经换库了,现在就由小编来为大家整理七月份的GMAT作文机经整理,下面是关于GMAT作文机经的相关问题,分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。

  七月第三篇(六月第二十六篇)

  The following appeared in the letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper:

  “Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize fitness levels in our town’s residents, we should, therore, equip our new community fitness center with such machines.”

  Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.

  一份叫Muscle Monthly的健康杂志规律性地刊登使用最好的训练器械的健美运动员的照片。据skyview报摊的摊主说它经常卖完。为了提高我镇居民的健康水平,我们应该给我们的新健身中心装备这样的器械。

  思路

  1、作者将健身视为fitness的唯一途径,但其实慢跑、游泳等都可以强身健体,控制饮食。

  2、 如果是为了body-building的机器很可能不能fitness。比如,cardiovascular fitness。

  3、这些健身器材的质量未经过检验,值得怀疑。

  4、false analogy, 因为刊登这个机器的杂志买的好不能得出这个机器好;很可能是价钱便宜,和其他的内容;那些人很可能并不真正用这些机器,而只是摆出造型。

  5、这个杂志买的好这个消息来自the owner of Skyview Newsstand。 这是什么角色,是机器提供商?还是主流媒体?所以,存在着信息来源不是很清晰。

  范文

  In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Muscle Monthly magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: (1) Muscle Monthly contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and (2) Muscle Monthly is a popular magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand. This argument is questionable on two counts.

  First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using the machines in Muscle Monthly magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising purposes.

  Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents. This assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness. Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much use to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents.

  In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness levels of the persons using them.

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