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新GRE ISSUE写作思路是怎样的?怎样写才能符合评分者的口味,怎样获取写作高分呢?下面是名师讲解的新GRE ISSUE写作思路,希望考生能认真阅读。
让我们来详细分析一道题目吧!
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
在这道题中很明显有一个时间的关系在里面,也就是条件,遇到了前面提到的有时间,地点,原因,结果,目的,条件,让步,比较和方式的逻辑分析情况时需要考生做拆分式分析。我们不难将这个题目拆成了两部分进行分析。
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1. As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems我们首先会看到rely这个单词,这个时候要分析我们是否真的越来越多的依赖科技来解决问题,是否有些领域的某些部分我们并不是依赖科技来解决问题呢。其次,rely是用机器辅助思考呢还是完全依赖科技思考呢。再次我们要关注问题problem这个单词,解决的是什么问题对于我们的思维习惯影响也会非常大,如果解决的是科技带来的问题呢?我们会继续思考。如果解决的问题是休闲娱乐方面的,则有可能会让我们,比如说沉迷于网络游戏,从时间的角度上影响我们思考学习的精力,但是又会从另外一个角度上增强我们的游戏操作能力。
2. the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 这里面最值得关注的一个单词就是surly。作者将这个论点绝对化了,任何绝对化的论断都是可以被一定程度上攻击的。
我们可以如下开头:(事实陈述类)
As is intensely described in the thought-provoking statement, not only does the author focus on the fact that people are relying more and more on technology to solve problems but also insinuates that the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate, which seems to be irrelevant at first glance but exceedingly associated on second thought. Admittedly, under the condition that we rely extremely on such technologies as calculators, our ability of calculation will deteriorate. However, with the proviso that human beings only take advantage of technology as a tool for assistance, the scenario will not likely take place.The author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. The purpose of my issue is to stress on the disagreement with the statement. To account for the above-mentioned phenomena, several aspects must be pushed forward to help us gain a deep insight into what has happened.
我们再举一个例子:Scandals are usul because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or rormer ever could.(声明类)
As is intensely described in the thought-provoking statement, not only does the author focus on the fact that scandals are usul but also insinuates that they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or rormer ever could, which seems to be irrelevant at first glance but exceedingly associated on second thought. Admittedly, under the condition that scandals reveal the darkness of our society, point out the corruption in our politics and, to some extent, concentrate our concerns on immortalities, they can surly let us pay the greatest attention on these subjects. However, with the proviso that the scandals prove unsound or forged ones, the scenario will not likely take place.The author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. The purpose of my issue is to stress on the disagreement with the statement. To account for the above-mentioned phenomena, several aspects must be pushed forward to help us gain a deep insight into what has happened.
最后举一个建议类的例子:A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
As is intensely described in the thought-provoking statement, not only does the author focus on the fact that students should study the same national curriculum but also insinuates that it should be obligatory all over the nation, which seems to be irrelevant at first glance but exceedingly associated on second thought. Admittedly, under the condition that students are allowed to choose their favorite subjects, they will have a chance to develop their abilities according the interests and hobbies However, with the proviso that such fundamental subjects as math are not paid enough attention to, other related field of study will be severely affected. The author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. The purpose of my issue is to stress on the general agreement with the statement. To account for the above-mentioned phenomena, several aspects must be pushed forward to help us gain a deep insight into what has happened.
我们可以如下开头:(事实陈述类)
由于激烈的是发人深省的发言中所述,不仅作者重点的事实,人们依靠技术越来越多的解决问题,但也影射必将恶化,人类有能力为自己着想,这似乎乍一看无关,但极其相关的第二次思想。诚然,我们非常依靠这种技术作为计算器的条件下,我们的计算能力将恶化。然而,人类只能作为辅助工具的技术优势与规定,方案将可能不会采取不必要的place.The作者扩展了这个广阔的断言一个不可逆转的极端,而忽略了一定的影响这个问题的紧迫因素。我的问题的目的是要强调与声明中的分歧。为了对上述现象,几个方面必须推进,以帮助我们获得了深刻洞察到发生了什么事。
我们再举一个例子:丑闻有用,因为我们的注意力集中在问题的方式没有喇叭或改革者(声明类)。
由于强烈的描述发人深省的发言中,不仅作者的事实,丑闻是有用的,但也影射,我们关注的重点问题的方式没有扬声器或改革者,这似乎是不相关的在重点乍看之下,但极其相关的第二个想法。诚然,丑闻揭示了我们社会的黑暗的条件下,,指出我们的政治腐败,在一定程度上,集中对immortalities我们的关注,他们能切切实实让我们付出的这些科目的最大关注。然而,该方案规定的丑闻被证明是不健全的或伪造的,不会有可能采取不必要的place.The作者扩展了这个广阔的断言一个不可逆转的极端,而忽略了一定的影响这个问题的紧迫因素。我的问题的目的是要强调与声明中的分歧。为了对上述现象,几个方面必须推进,以帮助我们获得了深刻洞察到发生了什么事。
最后举一个建议类的例子:一个国家应该要求所有学生学习相同的国家课程,直到他们进入大学。
由于是强烈的描述发人深省的发言中,不仅没有的事实,学生应学习相同的国家课程,但也影射,它应该是强制性的全国各地,这似乎乍一看无关,但作者的重点第二次思想极其相关的。诚然,条件下,允许学生选择自己最喜欢的科目,他们将有机会发展自己的能力,根据兴趣和爱好,但,与书中,数学等基础科目没有给予足够的重视,其他相关领域研究将受到严重影响。作者不必要的延伸这一广泛的说法是不可逆转的极端,而忽略了一定的影响这个问题的紧迫因素。我的问题的目的是要强调与声明一般协议。为了对上述现象,几个方面必须推进,以帮助我们获得了深刻洞察到发生了什么事。
以上的例证不是为了让考生死记硬背模板!重要的是让考生们学会分析思路,形散而神不散,反之就违背了笔者本意,也容易被GRE的雷达探测器发现雷同,酿成惨剧。
关于结尾部分,我们需要考生再次点题,告知阅卷人:我们的观点是什么,整体的逻辑和例证有哪些即可。文章不要求文字多么华丽。
和刚才说到开头的部分一样,不要机械的背诵所谓的模板,更重要的是知道答题每一个步骤的思路,创建形散而神不散的写作模式。
以上便是澳际名师给广大GRE考生讲解的新GRE ISSUE写作思路,希望考生在看完之后能有所帮助,尽快适应新GRE考试的改革!
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