gre argument29提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者： 34阅读

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破greissue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　难易程度：★★★

　　题目题材：选举，环境

　　gre argument29题目：

　　When Ida McAllister ran for mayor of Lake City four years ago, she failed to win even 30 percent of the vote. But since then, McAllister has made public her commitment to environmental causes. She would be wise, therore, to announce her intention to close all(3) Lake City parks to automobile traffic(1,2), thus following the example of the former mayor of Plainsville, Alecia Yu . On the recommendation of a small group of concerned citizens, Mayor Yu prohibited automobile traffic in all Plainsville parks, and therore was credited with solving the pollution problem and improving the quality of life in Plainsville(4). This action would have great appeal to the citizens of Lake City, most of whom participate in the community&aposs recycling program(5), and would guarantee McAllister&aposs success in her current quest to be Lake City&aposs new mayor(6,7).

　　提纲：

　　(1) No evidence is provided to indicate that citizens of Lake City prer prohibiting automobile traffic in all Lake City parks.

　　(2) The author fails to demonstrate that the environmental problems at Lake City are mainly caused by automobile traffic.

　　(3) The author fails to consider the feasibility and necessity of closing all Lake City parks to automobile traffic.

　　(4)The situations of Lake City and Plainsville might not be quite different.

　　(5)The fact that most of the citizens of Lake City participated in the community’s recycling program does not indicate that they are also highly concerned about environmental problems.

　　(6) The citizens of Lake City might be concerned about other problems rather than environment.

　　(7) The author ignores many other candidates who might be more competent than McAllister.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。