gre argument94提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者: 43阅读

  前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

  难易程度:★★

  题目题材:地产建设

  gre argument 94题目:

  The following appeared in a memo from the president of Bower Builders, a company that constructs new homes.

  "A nationwide survey (1) reveals that the two most desired home features (2) are a bathroom with a whirlpool tub and a large kitchen. Homes in a nearby development built by our competitor, Domus Construction, have whirlpool tubs and have sold much faster and at significantly higher prices than the average(3,4). To increase our sales and profits, we should include whirlpool tubs and larger kitchens as standard features (6) in all our new homes(5,7,8). Since our recent buyers(10) have voiced no complaints about small yards(9,10), we can also increase profits by decreasing the size of our yards."

  提纲:

  (1)The result of the nationwide survey does not necessarily apply to all specific regions.

  (2)Many other features are also important for consumers when they buy new houses.

  (3)The president unfairly assumes that it is the whirlpool tubs that resulted in the fast selling and higher price of the development built by Domus.

  (4)The president fails to provide any information about the profits Domus gained from the mentioned development.

  (5)There may be many other differences between Bowers and Domus.

  (6)Merely Including the new features in new homes may not sufficiently ensure our sales and profits to increase.

  (7)The president fails to illustrate the necessity of including the features in all new homes.

  (8)The president fails to consider the possible cost of providing these features, thus we cannot ensure that our profits will certainly increase.

  (9)The fact that no complaint about small yards has been received does not indicate that there will be no negative fects of decreasing the size of yards at all.

  (10)The feedback from the recent buyers may not be representative of all consumers.

  (11)The fact that recent buyers did not complain does not indicate there will not be any dissatisfaction in the future.

  注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

  无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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