gre argument130提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者: 23阅读

  前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

  难易程度:★★

  题目题材:家庭生活

  gre argument 130题目:

  The following appeared in the annual report of a chain of stores that sell supplies for do-it-yourself home improvements.

  "Current reports indicate that sales of new homes nationwide declined by 9 percent during the past year, while sales of existing homes increased by 16 percent(1,2). Thus we can expect that the percentage of homeowners who will be making repairs or improvements to their homes(3) will also increase. In addition, people who buy existing homes will have more money lt over(4) after the purchase to spend on home improvements. Finally, people who buy existing homes are more likely to make improvements themselves(5), as opposed to paying someone else. These factors combined indicate we can expect an increasing demand for products in all(6) our stores(7) nationwide, thus increasing our profits in the coming year(8)."

  提纲:

  (1)The author simply assumes that the trends of sales of homes will continue in the coming year.

  (2)The author fails to inform us the total amount of new homes and existing homes respectively, maybe the increase in the sales of existing homes is insignificant.

  (3)The author’s assumption that most existing homes sold last year need repairs or improvements, and that most homeowners of such homes are willing to make repairs and improvements is open to doubt..

  (4)The author fails to provide the prices of new homes and existing homes, and the financial status of people who buy the two kinds of homes, thus the assumption that people who buy existing homes will have more spare money is unwarranted.

  (5)No evidence could imply that people who buy existing homes are necessarily interested in DIY works.

  (6)The argument fails to rule out the possibility that the demand for DIY products will not increase in some regions.

  (7)The evidence cited above, if true, does not indicate that homeowners will choose products of the author’s stores.

  (8)The profits of the stores would be influenced by many factors, thus the conclusion that their profits will necessarily increase is doubtful.

  注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

  无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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