gre argument136提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者: 32阅读

  前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

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  题目题材:学校建设

  gre argument 136题目:

  The following is part of a letter from the Brookfree School Board.

  "As part of our new educational rorm program, we identified ten schools most in need of immediate improvement. An advisory committee is now recommending that we hire consultants to study further the schools&apos problems and to propose a plan of action. Only two years ago, however, another group of consultants determined that several schools in our district had problems because their principals were inexperienced(1,2). Thus, if we want to see immediate improvement(4) in our schools and save the district the money it would spend on hiring more consultants(6), we should replace all the principals in the ten worst schools with ten of our most experienced principals in the district(3,4)."

  提纲:

  (1)The author fails to provide information concerning the current situation of the schools which were identified by the consultants as having problems two years ago.

  (2)The consultants we hired two years ago failed to provide any substantial evidence to illustrate that those inexperienced principals were responsible for the problems of their schools, and that they did not have the ability to solve these problems.

  (3)The author simply assumes that the problems of the ten schools are also caused by their principals&aposexperience.

  (4)Merely changing principals in the worst schools might not sufficiently resolve the problems and bring forth immediate improvements.

  (5)The proposed replacement might cause some negative fects which are not sufficiently considered by the author.

  (6)The problems emerged two years ago might be different from problems we currently face, thus additional consultants and new solutions might still be necessary.

  注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

  无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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