前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

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　　题目题材：教育

　　gre argument 172题目：

　　The Mozart School of Music should obviously be the first choice(2) of any music student aware of its reputation(1). First of all, the Mozart School stresses intensive practice and training(3), so that students typically begin their training at a very young age(4). Second, the school has ample facilities and up-to-date professional equipment(5), and its faculty includes some(6) of the most distinguished music teachers in the world(7). Finally, many(10) Mozart graduates have gone on to be the best known and most highly paid(9) musicians in the nation(8).

　　提纲：

　　(1)The author does not inform us the amount of tuition charged by Mozart Music School, and if the gifted students could afford it.

　　(2)Other music schools may be more suitable for some students.

　　(3)The author fails to illustrate that intensive practice and training are important and necessary for all music students.

　　(4)Beginning intensive practice and training at very young age may cause some negative fects on music students.

　　(5)We are not sure whether the equipment and facilities are available to all new students.

　　(6)We are not informed about the performance of other faculty members, students are not necessarily taught by those most distinguished music teachers mentioned in the argument.

　　(7)Other music schools may also have ample facilities and famous teachers.

　　(8)The author unfairly attributes the graduates’ success to the education they received in Mozart School of Music.

　　(9)The argument simply equates being best known and highly paid with musical achievements.

　　(10)The argument fails to provide information concerning the general employment condition of the school’s graduates.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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