gre argument183提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者： 26阅读

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

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　　题目题材：失业就业

　　gre argument 183题目：

　　Many employees of major United States corporations are fearful that they will lose their jobs in the near future, but this fear is largely unfounded(9). According to a recent study, a majority of companies(1,2) expected to make new hires in the coming year(3), while fewer companies(1,2) expected to lay off employees. In addition, although it is very disturbing to be laid off, the proliferation of programs and of workshops(4) designed to improve job-finding skills(5,6) has made being laid off far less painful(7,8) than it once was.

　　提纲：

　　1. The author fails to rule out the possibility that a large number of workers will suffer from unemployment in the future, because we do not know how many new jobs will actually be created and how many workers will be laid off.

　　2. The author fails to inform us what kind of companies expected to make new hires and lay of employees respectively, thus we cannot evaluate the situation.

　　3. The result of the recent study was based only on the employment conditions in the coming year, we cannot guarantee that large-scale unemployment will not occur in the future.

　　4. We are not informed if the number of programs and workshops is enough to guarantee every laid off worker receiving necessary training.

　　5. The author fails to provide any information about the actual fect of the programs and workshops, they may not be sufficiently helpful for those who looking for new jobs.

　　6. Since the programs and workshops are designed to improve job-finding skills instead of working skills, they may not be helpful if there are no suitable job opportunities at all.

　　7. The proliferation of those programs and workshops is irrelevant to whether current employees will be laid of in the future.

　　8. The proliferation of job-finding programs may well indicate increasing job attrition.

　　9.Since the situation of employment would be affected by various factors, the mere facts cited above in themselves could not guarantee that the fear for employment in the future is utterly unfounded.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。