gre argument185提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者: 46阅读

  前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

  难易程度:★★

  题目题材:经营

  gre argument 185题目:

  The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment building to its manager.

  "One month ago, all the showerheads on the first five floors of Sunnyside Towers were modified to restrict the water flow to approximately 1/3 of its original force. Although actual readings of water usage bore and after the adjustment are not yet available(3), the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints(4) about low water pressure, no problems with showers(2) have been reported since the adjustment(1). Clearly, restricting water flow throughout all the 20 floors(6) of Sunnyside Towers(5) will increase our profits further(7)."

  提纲:

  1. The modification was taken place only one month ago, thus many negative fects might not have emerged yet.

  2. The owner does not provide detailed information about the usage of the first five floors of Sunnyside Towers, perhaps water flow is not a problem here at all.

  3. Without any actual readings of water usage bore and after the adjustment we cannot evaluate if the modification could actually save water.

  4. The fact that a few people complained about water pressure does not necessarily indicate that all other clients are satisfied with the modification.

  5. The owner ignores many negative fects of restricting the water flow.

  6. The owner hastily assumes that the restricting on water flow could be successfully carried out to all other floors of Sunnyside Tower.

  7.Adopting the owner’s suggestion alone may not suffice to ensure increased profits.

  注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

  无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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