声明：我们的范文仅为大家提供一个写作思路，以及一些可参考的论点论据，文章仅供参考，切记不可原文背诵，否则可能导致极低的分数!

�

�

　　Why are a variety of languages and cultures disappearing nowadays?

�

　　-----------discussion-----42+112+121+34=309 words in total------------

�

　　Introduction: (42 words)

�

　　Now the chance of experiencing different lifestyles or imitating to speak a few words of other languages for fun is slim due to the disappearance of some cultures and languages. I think that superstitious cultures and languages behind modern times cannot survive(thesis statement).

�

　　Body1 (112words)

�

　　Once I visited Se ethnic minorities village, located on a hillside in south of China. To my disappointment, I did not feel a different thing about ethnic clothes, food or music. Ridiculously, an old villager said that the forather of his race had been an embodiment of a fairy with a dog head and a human body! The old generations have been proud of being the descendants of the fairy; however, Generation Y may feel ashamed of that because they know exactly this is a superstitious myth and to be a dog&aposs descendants is not a glorious thing.Apparently,the cultures basing on superstitious beli would be torn down by social progress(topic sentence).

�

　　Body2(121words)

�

　　Further more, a language without written methods may be replaced by advanced one(topic sentence). There are many parts of the world where people cannot write because they do not have their own written language. The only way they can preserve their history is to recount it as sagas handed down from one generation of storytellers to another. With the fast pace of globalization, international aid can be put forward to reach every corner of the world. Those underdeveloped or isolated areas could receive food, medicine and education. The advanced civilization has pervaded into those primitive cultures hence they have started to learn writing something by the means of the available language accompanied with aid. Therore their original one would have disappeared.

�

　　Conclusion (34words)

�

　　In conclusion, the disappearance of some cultures or languages is not worth preventing. This is an unavoidable outcome of the global economic growth. Most importantly, people can enjoy more prosperity and social progress.

�

�

本文为广州仲恺雅思培训中心赖劲松老师原创

更多出国留学最新动态，敬请关注澳际教育手机端网站，并可拨打咨询热线：400-601-0022