雅思写作范文:有关志愿者服务的讨论.

2017-08-07 作者: 314阅读

  雅思写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思的一个重要材料,因为雅思写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面就是澳际小编整理的雅思写作范文:有关志愿者服务的讨论。

  It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?

  In modern societies, it is increasingly popular that young people volunteer on weekends in the local community service center to help the people in need. If all the youngsters do it in a regular way, the benits are obvious to both the community and these young adults although there are some minor drawbacks as well.

  It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid community service are enormous. Indeed, when an old person feels sick, the volunteers could offer first aid bore the doctor or the ambulance arrives. Likewise, if a disabled person has difficulty doing some daily activities such as shopping, the assistance from young volunteers is indispensable. Moreover, as far as the young people are concerned, they could develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others in the neighborhood. In this way, people may live in harmony in the community.

  Nevertheless, the downsides of volunteer community service are worth mentioning. In fact, in the city likeShanghai, an increasing number of graduates find it harder to make a living on their own. Thus, if all of the young adults are required to do full-time unpaid job in a fixed period, some of them would have no income source, which is unrealistic to these youngsters. In addition, it is believed that community service could possibly take up their time of acquiring knowledge.

  Therore, compared with the merits of volunteer community service offered by the young adults, the demerits of that are just a few but cannot be overlooked.

  以上就是这篇关于志愿者服务的讨论的雅思写作范文的全文,比较符合我们国家目前的国情,同时可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。

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