令人头疼的写作

时间总是不够～

30min要我读题+分析+打稿+写作+检查？

我太难了……

如果你也是胖虎，跟着我来一起学一学段落展开的技巧，让你有话可说，有理可依，有据可循～

先不急，脚踏实体才不会翻车，我们先来了解下，学霸level的写作要求：

An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:

1, Effectively addresses the topic and task

2, Well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or details （充分展开，结构清晰，使用适当的解释，例证和/或细节）

3, Displays unity, progression, and coherence

4, Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors

重点来啦！

什么是 appropriate explanation, exemplification and details？

无非就是各种类型的主观的reasoning以及客观的supporting。

接下来我们就来看，如何使用客观的evidence对文章进行论证8～

*下文4个首句也就是本段的中心论点，是后文的推理方式展开所围绕的中心。

1, Analogy

所谓“类比”就是类推比较的意思。通过对甲事物的分析，类推到与其属性相同的乙事物；然后从两者的比较中，得到某种启示，从而说明某个道理。

(Topic Sentence: The education a person receives in young days is the foundation of his future academic and career life)

Knowledge gained from primary education resembles the foundation of a skyscraper. Without a solid base, how could it endure the overwhelming weight and height of its superstructure? A poorly-educated student will never have a promising tomorrow. It is during these critical early years of learning that a child’s potential begins to show and their learning structure is established.

把理论知识类比成大厦根基，把抽象的含义具体化，更可以直观的展示出理论的重要性。进行类比之后，再来一个it is xxx that xxx的强调句进行巩固，可以使你在developing以及grammar上双赢。还不学起来～

2, Quoting

“引用”为自己的观点和看法提供有力的论据，使论据确凿充分，增强文章的说服力；同时也可以增加文章的可读性，调动读者阅读兴趣。

(Topic Sentence: We should hold an objective attitude about the relationship between favorable chances and success.)

Kevin Geary used to say, “Success happens not by chance, but because you were given a chance and took advantage of it.” The underlying meaning in this saying persuades us that meeting an opportunity is only a stepping stone toward a potential future success, while showing off before certain people and convincing them of one’s merits and achievements will indeed pave the way to success.

一个名言+一个解释，妥妥的使你的文章如同总统发言般的令人信服。

读不懂？没关系！再加上一句“说人话”的解释（The underlying meaning in this persuades us），再没有文化底蕴的人，也可以明白～

名人名言积累不够？没关系！背几个names + titles，句型精简含义深刻的表达学起来，你也可以成为名人，你也可以发表名言～

3，Result of research 

调查报告是反映对某个问题，某个时间或者某方面情况调查研究所得成果的总结。这类信息具有真实性，逻辑性，以及针对性等特征。

(Topic Sentence: Reliance on technology delays children’s development of mind.)

we may quote research conducted in order to discover whether children are doing homework with technological assistance: among the 1000 parents who were interviewed, over 85% admitted the fact that children could never do without surfing the net or sending message to the peers.

数据都是自己编的，不需要你“眼观六路耳听八方”地去了解，但是确可以让考官相信你的有证可循～

4, Example 

大家太熟悉，我就不解释了，直接上例子～

(Topic Sentence: Computer games are able to tie an addicted youngster to the chair before the computer screen.)

Concrete evidence can be seen in many families nowadays. The seven-year-old son of my cousin used to be so addicted to computer games that he would consume half of his weekend in front of the computer. As time went by, he became nearsighted and his studies were also negatively affected. As soon as his parents realized the potential threat of computer games, they had to set strict rules that prohibit their child from playing them too often.

(Topic Sentence: One of the most essential goal in movie-making is to enrich people’s inner world.)

One example is a classic movie entitled Murder on the Orient Express. The plot is so thought-provoking that viewers are turned into detectives themselves. In the movie, a murder is committed on the train and a number of passengers are brought under suspicion. Motivated to discover the real murderer, viewers are willing to make their own judgement. Needless to say, watching such a movie is just like going on an unforgettable inner journey.

好了，暂时就这样～

4个evidence先灵活运用起来～

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