英国留学文书模版之个人陈述

2017-04-05 作者: 482阅读


英国留学文书中的个人陈述,在申请英国留学的过程中扮演着非常重要的角色。它会代表申请人飞跃重洋去与英国大学招生官“面谈”。那英国留学文书中的个人陈述有没有模版呢?有,但是小编不建议同学们套用模版,要想写出一篇出色的个人文书,建议同学们首先要了解个人陈述及个人陈述在申请英国留学过程中的作用,只要这样,才能写出一篇完美的英国留学文书。


英国留学个人陈述,是所有申请英国留学的材料中唯一一个完全由自己来操控的资料,所以同学们一定要抓住这个机会写出一篇好的PS,给招生官留下良好的印象吧。尤其是当英国大学申请者特别多的时候,而且所有申请者成绩都特别突出的时候,PS就是唯一一种能凸显你与众不同的材料了。


同学们在写作个人陈述之前,一定要站在招生老师先问自己一下两个问题:

1. 我们是否想要这个学生来学习这门课程?

2. 我们是否想要这个学生来我们的学校学习?


这两个问题我们可以从以下几个问题来回答,回答完了我们的PS也写得差不多了。

1)这个学生是否适合他/她所申请的课程?

2)这个学生是否具备他/她所申请的课程需要的素质?

3)这个学生是否有足够的毅力、勤奋的品格以及不会轻易辍学?

4)这个学生是否会全力以赴地达到这门课程所要求的各项能力?

5)这个学生是否能在高压底下工作?

6)这个学生是否能很快得调整好自己融入到大学的新环境?

7)他们的交际能力如何?

8)他们是否热爱这个课程并且做了仔细的研究

9)他们对课程是否有真正的兴趣并且渴望去做更深入的学习?


这些问题就是需要你在PS当中去表述和解答,只不过你不能只是说YES和NO,你需要有足够的事实依据去证明你的说法,让你的观点言之有物。不过,招生办的老师们毕竟也是平凡人,他们有可能需要阅读成百上千的PS,所以即便你觉得已经对上述问题回答的很好了你还有可能被不幸地拒绝。


虽然小编不建议同学们去模仿模版,不过是分享一个英国留学文书PS的模版,供同学们学习学习:


Theology Personal Statement 神学个人陈述(PS)

Religion is based purely upon peoples' willingness to have faith in something which so many others question. Questions such as ‘Does God exist?’, ‘Why would God exist?’, ‘Is there one God or many?’ fascinate me, and I am perplexed by their answers; if answers even exist. I am also mesmerised as to why people place so much faith in someone of whom there is no solid empirical evidence. The Bible, apparent miracles, transcripts, doctrines, manuscripts such as the 'Dead Sea Scrolls', artacts and many other religious elements captivate me.


Attending church from a young age originally sparked my interest and this was enhanced by Philosophy and Ethics lessons, turning interest into passion. Although studying a purely Philosophical and Ethical course at AS level, discussions with my teachers regarding other faiths and religions, such as Buddhism, has led to a broader curiosity in the subject. As a member of Christian Union, I deepened my enthusiasm for the subject and have increased my understanding and knowledge of both the Bible and Christian events, in particular, Christian Theology and its history.。。。。(非完整版)


Sports Science Personal Statement 体育科学个人陈述(PS)


Sport has always been a massive part of my life ever since I started playing football at the age of seven. I have played at many different levels ranging from school football to playing for my league select and representing my region. Football is my main interest, besides the fact I enjoy other sports such as Badminton, basketball, volleyball and many more. I have had experience in these sports having participated in many during physical education at school, a subject which has played a big part in my school career. The things I enjoy about sport are that it needs a lot of dedication and hard work to be successful, as well as sport being very demanding and challenging. As a result in my interest in sport I want to study the subject further in education. I have played sport ever since I was young and still play it now, and still feel so emphatic in wanting to learn more about the subject. Sport being a key factor of my life, being very interested and driven to teach the subject, I am willing to succeed into studying sport further and give back to the subject to what I learned out of it。。。非完整版。。。点击登录查看更多内容


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