高质量文书助学生圆名校梦

2015-03-10 作者： 152阅读

高质量文书助学生圆名校梦
学生姓名：李同学
学术背景：合肥6中
考试成绩：托福86；SAT：1490
录取专业：undecided
录取学校：迈阿密牛津，普渡大学，宾汉姆顿大学，爱荷华大学等
顾问：合肥分公司顾问韩蕾

熊同学来咨询的时候已经是高二，瘦瘦高高的，和普通高中生无异。无语言成绩，之前也没有准备和学习过。得知情况之后，我就给学生规划了语言的学习和备考时间，以及文书材料的背景提升。经过2次托福的考试的实战，学生最高的分数是托福86，SAT最终为1490分。和许多大牛的学生相比，这个分数不是很理想。可是，文书老师通过和学生的沟通和了解，发现，熊同学有个特殊的经历。高一的时候，他是个名副其实的小胖子，体重达160斤，在外出买衣服的时候总找不到合适得体的衣服。正值青春的他，特别伤心。痛定思痛，决定减肥。1年时间，瘦了40斤。文书老师得知后，将他的特殊经历做为了申请素材。终于，在2月得到了好消息。

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