GMAT考试对作文的要求是很高的，大家看到GMAT作文只有6分。但实际上得到这个分数确实不太容易的一件事情，argument部分是GMAT写作过程中的重头戏，澳际小编带来范文赏析，希望大家喜欢：

　　我是准备GMAT考试的，本人水平实在很菜，但拿到成绩单后竟然有6分，真是FT，主要归功GMAT作文摸版，我的摸版主要是借鉴一个6分大牛的，和各位准备GMAT写作的同学分享一下

　　ARGUMENT

　　In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion,

　　the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that…

　　Further more, he also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s

　　argument appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will

　　reveal how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the

　　invalidity of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following

　　reasons.

　　In the first place, this argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that ….

　　The author unfairly assumes that…. However, the assumption is questionable

　　because the author provides no evidence to support this argument. The

　　arguer fails to take into account other facts that might contribute to the

　　result that …….. It is likely that , ……………..; it is also likely that

　　………………………… Any of these scenarios, if true, would show that

　　………………….. (72)

　　Therore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.

　　In the second place, the argument commits a logic fallacy of “after this

　　and therore because of this”. In no case can the mere fact that… be

　　cited as evidence to support the assumption that there is a causal-fect

　　relationship between A and B. Moreover, that just because B can be

　　statistically correlated with A does not necessarily mean that A is the

　　cause of B. In fact, the author has obviously neglected the possibility of

　　other alternative facts such as…, or … may contribute to a certain extent

　　to B. It may be only a coincidence that …… . Unless the author can rule

　　out other factors relevant to …, this assumption in question can not be

　　accepted.

　　In the third place, the evidence that the author provides is insufficient

　　to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient

　　to establish a general conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is

　　representative of all A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted.

　　In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any

　　conclusion at all.

　　In the fourth place, the argument has also committed a false analogy

　　fallacy. The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in

　　all respects, and the author assumes without justification that all things

　　are equal, and that the background conditions have remained the same at

　　different times or at different locations. There is, however, no guarantee

　　that this is the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support

　　this assumption. Lacking this assumption, the conclusion that … is

　　entirely unfounded. In fact, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn

　　from B are applicable to A. Differences between A and B clearly out weight

　　the similarities, thus making the analogy highly less than valid. For

　　example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B

　　to do....

　　In addition, the conclusion unjustifiably relies on the poll while the

　　validity of the survey itself is doubtful. The poll cited by the author is

　　too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who, when, how and

　　by whom the survey is conducted, neither does it mention what is the sample

　　size, or how the samples are selected. Until these questions are answered

　　the results are worthless as evidence to support that….

　　Besides, the author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive

　　alternatives. However, the author has never offered any reasons or

　　evidences for imposing an either/or choice. Common sense and observation

　　tells us that adjoining both A and B might produce better results.

　　To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in

　　the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims. To

　　make the argument more convincing concerning…. , the arguer would have to

　　provide more information that………………. The arguer should also

　　demonstrate that……………….to make this argument logically acceptable.

　　(51)

　　Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to

　　consider the whole situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be

　　adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he….

　　In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that …. Because

　　the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the

　　arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us

　　that…. In addition, the arguer could have to provide more precise

　　information to support his claim.

　　It is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any number

　　of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior products,

　　careless product pricing, inficient production, poor employee expense

　　monitoring, infective advertising, sloppy buying policies and other

　　wastul spending.

　　以上就是小编总结的GMAT考试作文部分的经典范文，这位同学利用这样的GMAT作文模板考到了理想的分数。所以正在准备GMAT写作的各位同学大家要多去利用考试资料，争取在考试的时候拿到高分。

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