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对于GMAT写作来说,开头最能够抓住评分官的目光的部分,如果开头部分有亮点的话,获得评分官的青睐,那么GMAT写作高分岂不是很轻松?那么下面澳际留学小编为大家带来GMAT写作模板通用版,希望对大家备考GMAT分析性写作有所帮助。
GMAT分析性写作开头是一篇文章的脸面,是GMAT写作Argument批判结构中开头部分的详细讲解,在这篇文章中为大家举例示范,相信同学们能够通过示范讲解学到Argument开头全能写法的精髓。
GMAT写作模板示范:
开头:Argument + Evaluation (分段转述+ 分段评价)
Step 1: 分段转述
原题背景句:The following appeared as part of an article in a daily newspaper:
提取可用成分:This part of an article in a daily newspaper
原题题干第一句:
“The computerized on-board warning system that will be installed in commercial airliners will virtually solve the problem of midair plane collisions.
转述:
The on-board warning system is assumed to be able to address the midair plane collisions.
… be assumed to do …
原题题干第二句:
One plane’s warning system can receive signals from another’s transponder—a radio set that signals a plane’s course—in order to determine the likelihood of a collision and recommend evasive action.”
转述:
By signaling a plane’s course, this system could forewarn the pilot of possible collision, thereby avoiding airline crash.
by doing … , through doing …
warn sb. of sth.
forewarn sb. of sth.
SVO, thereby doing.
转述原题完成:
As mentioned in a part of an article in a daily newspaper, the on-board warning system is assumed to be able to address the midair plane collisions. By signaling a plane’s course, this system could forewarn the pilot of possible collision, thereby avoiding airline crash.
As done …, SVO.
As you know, SVO.
As known, SVO.
Step 2: 分段评价
As mentioned in the part of an article in a daily newspaper, the on-board warning system isassumedto be able to address the midair plane collisions. This assumptionhasgood intent, but it, in itself, may not be logically well supported.The only supportingevidence givenisthe functionthat by signaling a plane’s course, this system could forewarn pilot of possible collision, thereby avoiding airline crash. This functionhasfailed to preclude collisions causednot by the course of a plane, however.
语言点1:diction variety
同根词变化assume, assumption, assumed, assuming
非同根变化assume, infer, imply
语言点2:coherence
连贯supported, supporting
语言点3:adj. = doing/done
Conclusion
Assumption
Evidence
supported conclusion 被动
supporting evidence 主动
语言点4:冠词替换
a/an
the
this
that
As mentioned in …, … isassumedto …. This assumptionhasgood intent, but it, in itself, may not be logically well supported.The only supportingevidence givenis…. …hasfailed to preclude …, however.
To avoid plane collisions is with no doubt a good will, so this passage has highlighted the feature of signaling the course to recommend evasive action. But the fectiveness of this computerized warning system might need more evidence to verify. In addition, as for the evidence, the data employed are remaining scattered, thereby failing to validate the whole reasoning.
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