以下澳际留学为大家更新2011年gmat机经，以下2011年8月gmat作文机经，AA，7月28日至8月12日，共40题。前1-26题见 gmat机经,7-8月gmat作文机经AA(至7.31)(一) 祝大家gmat考试顺利!

40. 是一个百货 做调查 加了一个 phmancy销量提升20% 所以得出结论 顾客更看重购物的方便性，所以应该 。。。 然后应该 增加new department 以增加 competitive advantage

[v2] 一个grocery shop去年增加了pharmacy section就导致了sales increase20%，所以一个人就说customers like one-stop shopping。 因此，要增加profit就要增加repair 还有一个什么部门（不记得了），还有什么什么两个部门。。。

[v3] The total sales increased 20% after adding a pharmacy totheir grocery store. Because the customers like convenience of one-stopshopping, the manager thinks they should put clothing department to a hairsalon or restaurant…..

提供观点：

1、时间关系不能推出因果关系。仅因药品专柜开在销售额增加前，就认为总体销售额增加时其结果，是错误的

2、错误类比。即使销售额增加是由药品专柜开设引起，也不代表开设其他专柜能增加销售额（顾客不一定更关注一条龙购物的便利）

3、增加销售额未必增加利润，增加服务也要增加成本

北美范文：

The management of the Megamart grocery store concludes that adding new departments and services is the surest way to increase profits over the next couple of years. They are led to this conclusion because of a 20 percent increase in total sates, realized after the addition of a pharmacy section to the grocery store. On the basis of this experience, they concluded that the convenience of one-stop shopping was the main concern of their customers. The management’s argument is faulty in several respects.

In the first place, the management assumes that the increase in total sales was due to the addition of the pharmacy section. However, the only evidence offered to support this conclusion is the fact that the addition of the pharmacy preceded the increase in sales. But the mere fact that the pharmacy section was added bore the increase occurred is insufficient grounds to conclude that it was responsible for the increase. Many other factors could bring about this same result. Lacking a detailed analysis of the source of the sales increase, it would be sheer folly to attribute the increase to the addition of the pharmacy section.

In the second place, even if it were the case that the increase in total sales was due to the addition of the pharmacy section, this fact alone is insufficient to support the claim that adding additional departments will increase sales even further. It is quite possible that the addition of the pharmacy section increased sales simply because there was no other pharmacy in the vicinity. The additional proposed departments and services, on the other hand, might be well represented in the area and their addition might have no impact whatsoever on the profits of the store. In other words, there may be relevant differences between the pharmacy section and the additional proposed sections that preclude them from having a similar fect on the sales of the store.

In conclusion, the management’s argument is not well-reasoned. To strengthen the conclusion, the management must provide additional evidence linking the addition of the pharmacy section to the increase in total sales. It must also show that there are no exceptional reasons for the sales increase due to the pharmacy section that would not apply to the other proposed additions.

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　　以下澳际留学为大家更新2011年gmat机经，以下2011年8月gmat作文机经，AA，7月28日至8月12日，共40题。前1-26题见 gmat机经,7-8月gmat作文机经AA(至7.31)(一) 祝大家gmat考试顺利!

40. 是一个百货 做调查 加了一个 phmancy销量提升20% 所以得出结论 顾客更看重购物的方便性，所以应该 。。。 然后应该 增加new department 以增加 competitive advantage

[v2] 一个grocery shop去年增加了pharmacy section就导致了sales increase20%，所以一个人就说customers like one-stop shopping。 因此，要增加profit就要增加repair 还有一个什么部门（不记得了），还有什么什么两个部门。。。

[v3] The total sales increased 20% after adding a pharmacy totheir grocery store. Because the customers like convenience of one-stopshopping, the manager thinks they should put clothing department to a hairsalon or restaurant…..

提供观点：

1、时间关系不能推出因果关系。仅因药品专柜开在销售额增加前，就认为总体销售额增加时其结果，是错误的

2、错误类比。即使销售额增加是由药品专柜开设引起，也不代表开设其他专柜能增加销售额（顾客不一定更关注一条龙购物的便利）

3、增加销售额未必增加利润，增加服务也要增加成本 上12下

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