GMAT考试 GMAT作文机经AI部分12月23日更新(十四).

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  GMAT考试已于12月1日更换题库,以下是2011年12月的GMAT作文AI部分机经更新,更新日期从12月1日起至12月23日,目前共42题。澳际留学祝大家GMAT考试顺利!

  40. V1 by Allen0607 A powerful business leader has far more influence on the course of a community or a nation than does a government official

  V2 by riotact a power business leader or government official 谁 has more opportunity to influence community 等

  考古:

  原题: No. 24 A powerful business leader has more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does the government official.

  思路:

  * Admittedly, 领导人的作用有时不象企业家一样apparent. 因为国家的发展,人们的生活,与企业closely related. 比如GATES,领导了信息产业革命;Rockeller,控制国家的石油命脉took control of American oil supply。企业家通过影响企业的行为,从而直观上影响人course of a community.

  * 但是,企业的一切影响is based on its existence, which is permitted by the government. 政府制定各种policy来允许企业的存在,企业家的一切行为需要被政府允许才能产生作用。

  * Moreover, 影响一个国家,需要强大的power, which can be only generated from absolutely authority. 这样的绝对权力是企业不具备的。Yet even a cursory review of the history reveals substantial evidence that it is the government leader rather than the business leader that can make the pivotal decision when the nation is in crisis. 比如,在经济recession,企业的力量无法使经济好转,revive the economy of the whole nation, 只有政府运用行政措施,制定positive policy to stimulate the companies and thus the economy of the whole nation. 比如Roosevelt. Bill Clinton. financial policy

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  # 虽然business leader很有影响,比如乔布斯改变了世界,但是business leader影响有限,只能影响industry

  # 反而government officials 作为Policy maker可以改变全国甚至全世界的人,比如欧洲现在的债务危机,如果officials处理不好就会影响全欧洲甚至全世界

  范文:

  Historical examples of both influential public officials and influential business leaders abound. However, the power of the modern-era business leader is quite different from that of the government official. On balance, the CEO seems to be better positioned to influence the course of community and of nations.

  Admittedly the opportunities for the legislator to regulate commerce or of the jurist to dictate rules ofequity are official and immediate. No private individual can hold that brand of influence. Yet official power is tempered by our check-and-balance system of government and, in the case of legislators, by the voting power of the electorate. Our business leaders are not so constrained, so, their opportunities far exceed those of any public official. Moreover, powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold de facto legislative and judicial power by way of their direct influence over public officials, as the Clinton Administration’s fund-raising scandal of 1997 illuminated all too well.

  The industrial and technological eras have bred such moguls of capitalism as Pullman, Rockeller,Carnegie, and Gates, who by the nature of their industries and their business savvy, not by force of law, have transformed our economy, the nature of work, and our very day-to-day existence. Of course, many modern-day public servants have made the most of their opportunities—for example, the crime-busting mayor Rudolph Giuliani and the new-dealing President Franklin Roosevelt. Yet their impact seems to pale next to those of our modern captains of industry.

  In sum, modem business leaders by virtue of the far-reaching impact of their industries and of their freedom from external constraints, have supplanted lawmakers as the great opportunists of the world and prime movers of society.

  以上就是12月23日更新的GMAT作文机经AI部分,考生可以适当借鉴,并通过练习来掌握GMAT作文的写作规律,从而顺利通过GMAT考试。 相关链接

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