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14. 6. The following appeared aspart of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life.“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seekingnew business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession,Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is theindustrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than itsshare of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting toexpand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research anddevelopment of innovative technologies.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
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原题猜测:
The following appeared aspart of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life.“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seekingnew business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession,Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is theindustrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than itsshare of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting toexpand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research anddevelopment of innovative technologies.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
思路:一份面向地方生活的杂志上的一篇文章 企业在寻找新的商机或位置时应该去Helios城。甚至在最近的衰退中,Helios的失业率也比地区平均水平低,它是地区的工业中心,历史上它提供的比它在地区制造业工作中分享的份额中更多。而且,Helios正试图通过吸引研究和发展革新技术的公司来扩张它的经济基础。
FLAW:
l All things are equal(remain unchanged):历史上的作用不能用于仙子啊与未来
l Gratuitous assumption:因为H失业率低于其他地区就假设那里有商机,失业率较低也可能有其他因素导致
l False casual relationship:吸引研究和发展革新技术的公司与商机无直接因果关系
黄金范文80例分析
1, 因为H地区industrial and manufacturing比较attractive,所以那里的工人很可能只适合做这类的,如果缺乏能够做innovative technologies and research的工人labor pool,那么很可能导致失败。
2, H的低失业率更可能成为坏处。因为比如有less available work force。企业必须提高wage才能吸引他们。提高了COST。
3, 错误的假设过去的成功能够代表未来。比方说已经饱和的资源、过分的竞争、以及可能出现的错误政策,都可能导致H地区的经济不再发达。
例文:
In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is the industrial center of the region, providing most of the region’s manufacturing jobs and enjoying a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, forts are currently underway to expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.
To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios could support all types of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, it’s unlikely that Helios will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus or research and development of innovative technologies.
Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will have to either attract new workers to Helios or pay the existing workers higher wages in order to lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies seeking to relocate.
In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking new business opportunities to choose Helios.
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