GMAT考试作文机经AI部分 5月7日更新(三).

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  GMAT考试已于2012年5月4日更换题库,这是旧的GMAT考试最后一次换库了,这也是GMAT作文AI部分的最后一次换库了。新的GMAT考试将于6月份于大家见面,而AI作文将被删除。因此,希望参加最后一次旧GMAT的考生好好努力,争取旗开得胜!以下是2012年5月的GMAT作文AI部分机经更新,更新日期从12年5月7日开始!

  5.(1次)

  原始寂静:

  V1(BY: heye227): Constant innovation and change 会对an organization产生同样多的damange as promote。

  原题:

  Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improve to it.

  一个企业中的持续创新和改变可能给企业带来的坏处和好处一样多

  参考思路:

  l We are living in a world which is developing at a termendous speed which requires constant innovation and change.

  l However, constant change and innovation can do harm to the organization if we can not adapt the organization to the innovation and changes.

  l Innovation and change is a double-edged sword. We should quickly adjust ourselves to the innovation and change and make them better serve us.

  市场竞争激烈,只有不断创新才能持续发展,使公司在全球化的市场中生存下来

  不断的创新可以降低成本,提高产品质量,吸引更多的消费者,获得更高里利润

  当然,创新的成本也是比较高的,有时可能会带来一些负面影响(比如失败的可能性)但是不能因为有可能失败就不去创新。

  6.(1次)

  原始寂静:

  V1(BY: GT720110): As technology and demand for certain services change, the worker will lose their job. The responsibility to adjust to such changes should … (中间是什么,失忆了) individual worker, not government or business.” 感觉自己理解力有些问题的说。。。

  原题:

  As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.

  “当某项特定服务的技术和需求改变时,很多工人将失业。适应这种改变的责任属于每个工人而不是政府或企业。”

  参考思路:

  1、 个人确实应该首先take the chi responsibility of their job obsolescence. 因为对自己的生活负责的人,首先是自己。现在的社会也提供了机会:很多学校提供短期的培训,人们可以参加保持自己keep up with the changes of the technologies and new direction of businesses。第二,只有个人采取主动,才能从根本上解决问题。否则merely rely on the help coming from government or business,人们会变得消极become passive and lose enterprise. 长期以来,对整个社会都有negative impact on the further development of one society.

  2、 但是,这不是说企业不应该负责。after all, 是企业作出了创新和改变,并且造成了这些改变——并且造成了job obsolescence。应该为这些负责任。比如,为员工提供opportunity of training for the new technique…,这样也可以节约重新培训totally new employee的cost。

  3、 Moreover, 政府也应该采取一些行动。政府作为一个社会的管理者supervisor,有责任保证全社会的well being. 应该帮助个人完成适应adjustment. 可以通过提供一些insurance for unemployment, advice for the occupational choice, necessary information of the new trend of business…

  参考范文:

  As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjust? While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.

  l agree that individuals must assume primary responsibility for adjusting to job obsolescence, especially since our educational system has been preparing us for it. For decades, our schools have been counseling young people to expect and prepare for numerous major career changes during their lives. And concerned educators have recognized and responded to this eventuality (不测事件) with a broader base of practical and theoretical coursework that affords students the flexibility to move from one career to another.

  However, industry should bear some of the responsibility as well. It is industry, after all, that determines the particular directions technological progress and subsequent social change will take. And since industry is mainly responsible for worker displacement, it has a duty to help displaced workers adjust—through such means as on-site training programs and stipends for further education.

  Government should also assume some of the responsibility, since it is partly government money that fuels technological progress in industry. Moreover, government should help because it can help—for example, by ensuring that grants and federally insured student loans are available to those who must retool (to reequip with tools) in order to find new work. Government can also help by observing and recording trends in worker displacement and in job opportunities, and by providing this information to individuals so that they can make prudent decisions about their own further education and job searches.

  In conclusion, while individuals should be prepared for future job changes, both government and industry shoulder obligations to provide training programs, funding and information that will help displaced workers successfully retool and find new employment.

以上就是2012年5月7日更新的GMAT作文机经AI部分,考生可以适当借鉴,并通过练习来掌握GMAT作文的解题规律,从而顺利通过GMAT考试。 相关链接

1.GMAT考试作文机经AI部分 5月7日更新(四)

2.GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 5月8日更新(一)

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