GMAT作文机经整理:建造体育馆减少健康预算.

2017-08-10 作者: 244阅读

  GMAT作文机经整体来说受换库影响不是很大,但是还是会有一些新题的,考生朋友可以将最近两三个月的GMAT作文机经都拿出来看看,为此澳际小编特收集整理GMAT作文机经分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助。

  【原题】OG12 106

  The following appeared in a memo to the Saluda town council from the town’s business manager.

  “Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50% and thereby achieve a balanced town budget.”

  Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.

  【参考思路】

  Gratuitous assumption:

  ①错误假设了一旦建造了gym,人们就一定会去exercise

  ②错误假设Saluda的人是因为不运动而变得hospitalized,有可能是因为环境污染导致患病。

  Cost-fect analysis:

  建造体育馆的花费可能超过了节省下来的health insurance cost

  【参考范文】

  In this memo Saluda’s business manager recommends that the town provide a gym for its employees as a means of balancing the town’s budget. The manager reasons that since studies show that people who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often than those who don’t exercise, Saluda could save approximately 50% on the cost of its group health insurance coverage by providing its employees with a well-equipped gym. The savings on insurance would balance the town’s budget. The manager’s argument is unconvincing because it rests on several unsupported and dubious assumptions.

  First, the manager assumes that Saluda’s employees will exercise regularly if a well-equipped facility is provided for them. This assumption is questionable since the mere fact that a gym is made available for employee use is no guarantee that they will avail themselves of it at all, let alone on a regular basis.

  Second, the manager assumes that Saluda’s employees do not exercise regularly. Once again, the manager offers no support for this crucial assumption. Obviously, if all of Sauda’s employees already engage in daily exercise, the hospitalization rate will be unaffected by equipping an exercise facility and no savings will be realized on the group health insurance.

  Third, the manager assumes that there is a direct relation between the hospitalization rate for employees and the cost of their group health insurance such that a reduction in the hospitalization rate will result in a corresponding reduction in the cost of insurance. While this may turn out to be true, the manager has failed to offer any evidence for this claim.

  Finally, the manager assumes that the cost of building a well-equipped exercise facility will not negate the savings realized on the group health insurance. Until evidence has been provided to show that this is not the case, the manager’s plan is unacceptable.

  In conclusion, the business manager’s proposal to provide an exercise facility as a means of balancing Saluda’s budget is not convincing. To strengthen the argument, evidence would have to be provided for each of the assumptions listed in the previous analysis.

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