1月GMAT作文机经：校医院 vs. 私立医院.

2017-08-10 作者： 235阅读

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　　【原始】

　　有一个misconception说 university hospital 比 private hospitals 好但是arguer觉得相反他说university hospital只雇佣了少于15%的医生而且少于20%的成功率治疗成功而且学校医院收入低医生工资也低他还说学校医院的医生不止在那里工作还有teaching researching和teaching 所以overall quality for care in university hospitals is lower than private hospitals (by:colleen108)

　　【考古】

　　V1 是对比大学校医院和外面私立医院的作者的结论是- 大学的医院quality of care 没有其他医院那么好。作者给出的几个理由是：1，大学的医院profit 比外面医院少20%，大学的医生收入比外面医生收入少15%。 2，说大学医院的医生要把他们的时间分成3份用来讲课，做research 和治病，所以没有外面医生那么全心治疗。

　　V2 (疑似原题) The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

　　【参考思路】

　　思路A：1、从一个医院的情况就推广到整个太草率

　　2、治愈率低可能是因为接受的患者得的病都比较罕见等原因造成的

　　3、工资低，总体利润低，时间分配给教学都不能一定说明质量差。可能其他福利好，接受的病人少，教学研究有助于进步

　　思路B：1、首先，医生的人数与质量之间没有必然的因果原因。profit跟质量也无关系。很可能treating price is significantly lower。

　　成功率不能说明问题。缺乏其他的证据，忽略了他因：比如因为质量高，所以很多serious illness的，而2、送往其他医院的一般都是common cases.

　　3、时间不能代表问题。因为那些医生所做的研究很可能帮助他们进行治疗。

　　【参考范文】

　　In this argument the author concludes that university hospitals provide no better care than private or community hospitals. The author bases this conclusion on the following claims about university hospitals: the ones in this region employ 15 percent fewer doctors; they have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients; they pay their staffs less money; they make less profit than community hospitals; and they utilize doctors who divide their time between teaching, research and treating patients. This argument is unconvincing for several reasons.

　　The most egregious reasoning error in the argument is the author’s use of evidence pertaining to university hospitals in this region as the basis for a generalization about all university hospitals. The underlying assumption operative in this inference is that university hospitals in this region are representative of all university hospitals. No evidence is offered to support this gratuitous assumption.

　　Secondly, the only relevant reason offered in support of the claim that the quality of care is lower in university hospitals than it is at other hospitals is the fact that university hospitals have a lower success rate in treating patients. But this reason is not sufficient to reach the conclusion in question unless it can be shown that the patients treated in both types of hospitals suffered from similar types of maladies. For example, if university hospitals routinely treat patients suffering from rare diseases whereas other hospitals treat only those who suffer from known diseases and illnesses, the difference in success rates would not be indicative of the quality of care received.

　　Finally, the author assumes that the number of doctors a hospital employs, its success rate in treating patients, the amount it pays its staff and the profits it earns are all reliable indicators of the quality of care it delivers. No evidence is offered to support this assumption nor is it obvious that any of these factors is linked to the quality of care delivered to patients. Moreover, the fact that doctors in university hospitals divide their time among many tasks fails to demonstrate that they do a poorer job of treating patients than doctors at other kinds of hospitals. In fact, it is highly likely that they do a better job because they are more knowledgeable than other doctors due to their teaching and research.

　　In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to demonstrate that university hospitals in this region are representative of all university hospitals, as well as establishing a causal link between the various factors cited and the quality of care delivered to patients.

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