gre argument163提纲分析汇总.

2017-08-09 作者： 72阅读

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　难易程度：★★

　　题目题材：社会

　　gre argument 163题目：

　　The following is taken from the editorial section of the local newspaper in Rockingham.

　　"In order to save a considerable amount of money(1), Rockingham&aposs century-old town hall should be torn down(2,3) and replaced by the larger and more energy-ficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter and cool it in summer(4). The new, larger building would be more energy ficient, costing less per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall(5). Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out some of the space in the new building(7), thereby generating income for the town of Rockingham(6)."

　　提纲：

　　(1)The author fails to consider the cost of constructing the new building, thus the assumption that the construction will save a considerable amount of money is open to question.

　　(2)The author fails to consider the negative fects of tearing down the old town hall.

　　(3)Granted that a new hall is necessary, the necessity of tearing down the old one is unwarranted.

　　(4)Other possible measures could also be taken to solve the problems with the old town hall.

　　(5)The author fails to justify the assumption that the energy problems will automatically be solved once the new building is constructed.

　　(6)The author fails to investigate if there are any individuals and institutions who are willing to rent the space in the new hall, and how much rent could we receive.

　　(7)The author does not take into account the negative fects of renting out some of the space in the new hall.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。