前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

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　　题目题材：政治经济

　　gre argument 223题目：

　　The following appeared as an editorial in one of Coleville&aposs city newspapers.

　　"Even though a high percentage of Coleville City&aposs businesses failed last year, we who live in Coleville City should keep in mind the fact that the Coleville region(2) has attracted a great many new businesses(1) over the last three years(3). It is well known that new businesses are, on average, much more likely to fail than are long-established ones, so the business failures should not be considered a sign of poor economic health(4). Indeed, many analysts regard the presence of a significant number of new companies among a region&aposs businesses as a sign of economic health(5). Thus Coleville City appears to be in good, not poor, economic shape."

　　提纲：

　　(1)The author fails to inform us what percentage of long-established businesses failed last year, thus we could not evaluate if it is the emergence of new businesses that resulted in the high percentage of business failures.

　　(2)Without clarify the dinition of the term ‘Coleville region’, we cannot evaluate if there are many new businesses at Coleville City merely based on the fact that the Coleville region has attracted many new businesses.

　　(3)The great many new businesses were emerged over the last three years, as the author cited, thus could not constitute a convincing explanation for the failures last year.

　　(4)The author fails to provide sufficient evidence to show why the business failures are not a sign of poor economic health.

　　(5)The analysts’ opinion might not be true for all conditions.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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