GRE写作:简单粗暴写好ARGUMENT.

2017-08-09 作者: 270阅读

  GRE写作对于国内考生来说是一个不小的挑战,中国人的思维与西方人不同,写文章的方式也不一样,所以面对新GRE写作许多人都十分苦恼。下面来看一下一位过来人写好ARGUMENT的GRE写作方法:

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  我知道好多人都受了担心雷同的毒害,一开始准备ARGUMENT就开始拼命独立思考,独

  立创作。可惜自己怎样也逃离不出是成千上万的G男G女的普通一员。还有那些找到各种

  美文精选的,都憋着一口气想弄点儿新奇故事出来涂抹个惊艳一笔。结果到头来看着最顺眼

  的还是我这样的模板。

  美文一点儿都不美好。所以,遇见一个还算靠谱顺眼的,你就从了吧。

  真的就是这么回事儿。要么浓妆艳抹,要么简单粗暴,犹豫往往意味着更大的伤害。人生经

  不起推敲。

  当然我说写“好”ARGUMENT,还是略有夸张的,但我相信按这路子做肯定不会低分。而

  我说简单粗暴就更没有错了,那简直是人生的哲学,决不是局限在写作文上。

  其实你能安静下来看这篇烂文,说明你对待ARGUMENT已经很认真了,再塌实下心来辨

  别一下,形成自己的意见,就可以了。好的话你当然要改改就用啊。不好就骂呗。不用太担

  心。毕竟简单粗暴没有错啊。

  下面我就来说一下。取舍完全由你。我确实就是用这套路子,作文得到5.5分。肯定是还可

  以改得更好。世间所有事其实都讲缘分和默契。希望你第一时间爱上我的模板。

  我顷尽所有。模板。逻辑错误。例子。242题库。提纲。

  这绝对是我的看家宝贝了,都拿出来给你啦。对于ARGUMENT, 我也再无他言喽!

  不可分心旁骛→深呼吸→ARGUMENT来了→加速

  模板

  In this argument, the arguer advocates that [main idea]. Although this argument might seem reasonable

  at first glance, it is in fact ill-conceived. The reasons are stated as follows.

  In the first place, the arguer assumes that [fallacy 1]. Although this is entirely possible, the arguer offers

  no evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption. It is very likely that [reason 1]. An appropriate

  example is not very far to seek. [example 1]. The arguer&aposs reasoning is dinitely flawed unless the

  arguer can convince me that these and other possible scenarios are unlikely.

  In the second place, the arguer assumes that [fallacy 2]. Nevertheless, there is no guarantee that it is

  necessarily the case, and the arguer does not supply any evidence to confirm this assumption. It is quite

  possible that [reason 2]. To illustrate this point clearly, let us take a look at the following representative

  example. [example 2]. Without accounting for and ruling out these and other alternative explanations,

  the arguer cannot bolster the recommendation.

  The last but not the least important, even if the evidence turns out to support the foregoing assumptions,

  the arguer just simply assumes that [fallacy 2]and neither any conclusive scientific evidence nor any

  anecdotal evidence is provided to affirm this assumption. It is reasonable to doubt that what the arguer

  assumes will not happen in reality. It is just as possible that [reason 3]. For example, [example 3].To

  reach the cited conclusion, the arguer must explain either why none of these alternatives is available or

  why none of them is able to sustain.

  To sum up, the arguer’s argument mentioned above is not based on valid evidence or sound reasoning,

  neither of which is dispensable for a conclusive argument. In order to draw a better conclusion, the

  arguer should reason more convincingly, cite some evidence that is more persuasive, and take every

  possible consideration into account.

  模板说明

  呃。。。怎么样?是不是觉得这是个简单粗暴的模板呢?没有错,我是觉得很简单很粗暴

  的。你没看到我考场上写的ARGUMENT, 我觉得那个更白。呃。。。让人着迷的就是光这

  个全是废话的模板就已然313字了,再加些简单的句型、粗暴的例子……你写不出500

  字我请你吃饭!食物当然也要简单粗暴,鲍鱼龙虾这种低级的食物就不要吃啦……

  用这篇简单粗暴的模板,在考场上最需要你动脑想的就是三个逻辑错误。为你赢取时间。

  把时间花在刀刃上。

  寻找逻辑错误会是你复习ARGUMENT 的一个重点。至于每个逻辑错误需要提供的

  example,越简单,越粗暴,就越好。原因就是想找一个有深度、有哲理、让绝大多数人

  都信服的理由太难了,别说我们这些外国考生,就连英美作家都很难在短时间内做到。

  另一个原因就是,即使有一个好理由了,谁去看呢?机器当然看不懂了。那人呢?他看

  了成千上万的文章。你以为就你的观点好?他什么没见过?而且他还要去看成千上万的

  文章,哪有时间去细读你的?早晚要简单粗暴,并没有别的出路。

  所以就是只要多练只要简单粗暴,就能写好ARGUMENT。

  细节技巧

  ·and 前后变换顺序

  ·main idea 可以写的长一些

  ·example 中的话尽量写多,尽量写细,尽量写对,不一定非用for example

  剩余时间

  ·检查拼写

  ·补充首段

  [main idea]

  ·in order to 好/boost (sagging) profits/improve the economic health

  ·A should emulate B’s measures

  [补充首段]

  To bolster the conclusion,

  the arguer provides the evidence that...,

  points out that...

  cites the result of a resent survey that... indicated a prerence for...

  cites data collected during a recent study, suggesting that ...

  along with the fact that .../ based onwhich he assumes that ...

  In addition/Furthermore/Meanwhile,

  he projects/predicts that

  逻辑错误

  调查错误

  ·the sampling of the study is reliable.

  It is very likely that the experimental and the control groups of the study were not randomly

  chosen.

  For example, they are just ... which could not represent a diverse cross section of the

  population.

  画蛇添足

  ·it is necessary that

  过去

  ·be responsible for/contribute to/ give birth to

  未来

  ·this trend in... will continue in the future

  空间变化

  ·the similar strategy will carry a similar result at ...

  另起炉灶

  ·no course of action other than the proposed one will contribute to the problem.

  It is just as possible that other proposals might also solve the problem.

  For example, there are ...

  负面影响

  ·there is no possible detrimental fect of...

  例子

  核心词汇

  such as/ especially if/

  人口因素

  ·A has experienced a large growth in its population

  管理因素

  ·imprudent (pricing and distribution) strategies or poor management

  偶然因素

  ... was an aberration

  先天因素

  ·... was more relatively healthy/relativelybright than average to begin with.

  For example, they exercise regularly and eat healthily

  司机因素

  ... do not have enough security knowledge in mind or do not keep alert all the time.

  For example, a large portion of A, who enjoy the feeling of freedom and high speed, are bold and

  careless, which may be the lurking danger for accidents.

  时间因素

  were traveling during less safe times of the day, such as early in the morning, or during twilight

  地形因素

  the geographic features of ... are more conductive to cause accidents.

  For example, ... has many sharp turns

  天气因素

  poor weather

  价格因素

  the price of... has been cut down in order to tout consumers

  旅游因素

  A is a tour resort, so the customers who ... are mainly touristsinstead of local residents.

  宴会因素

  most of the consumption is from the big company’s invitation banquet

  品牌因素

  A has some special advantage that B do not have - and that it cannot duplicate in any other types.

  供求因素

  Property values are a function of supply and demand.

  It is at least likely that the demand for housing in the area happens to rocket dramatically due to an

  influx of major employers.

  In addition, it is possible that the supply of housing has decreased.

  竞争因素

  A’s competitive opponent firms and companies move to other cities. (go bankrupt)

  成本因素

  the cost for ... may has gone up rapidly, which will have to be included in the retail price of ...

  市场因素

  consumption of other similar products have also declined during that time,

  the amount of which might even exceed that of ...

  价格因素

  the earlier products are prohibitively expensive for most consumers

  改革因素

  the university built more laboratories in the pasttwo years, and then, it is obvious that more

  money would spend on the new projects.

  教授因素

  there are too few professors of botanyin the university and the students,

  although lack of interest, have no choice but to attend Thomas&aposs class

  必修因素

  the classes she teaches are requirements for every science student.

  老师因素

  the school hired more fective teachers whose outstanding teaching methods contributed to the

  improvement of……

  新旧因素

  ... has to update its trucks, which are old and out of service, rather than add to its new...

  规模因素

  the size of the farms has shrinked.

  For example, a farm which has 30 cows producing more milk than two farms each of which has

  10 cows.

  质量因素

  ... is not so good, so people are unwilling to go to ... when they ...

  顾客因素

  many customers are indeed disgruntled about..., but too busy to take time and fort to formally

  complain.

  领导因素

  college career-planning staff provides students with little information about the current job market.

  竞争因素

  they have already attended a similar course

  there are cheaper but highly-qualified products from the formidable opponents/ the surrounding

  areas coming in the instant future insomuch as these products will tout more customers and make

  the future’s sales sharply down;

  习惯原因

  the consumer tastes and habits have become so well entrenched that consumers would not be glad

  to change.

  流行因素

  It is well known that the taste of the public especially when it comes to such vogue cases as ...

  shifts quicker than anyone can imagine. Today’s hot issue may well be in tomorrow’s landfill.

  Maybe at that time ... are in the fashion due to... other than...

  个人因素

  many unemployed residents are unwilling to go to work if offered the chance, for their handsome

  welfare can support their families

  以上就是这位过来人的简单粗暴写好ARGUMENT的GRE写作方法,希望各位考生看后得到一些启发,从而更好地备战新GRE考试。

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