GRE作文满分指导分析.

2017-08-09 作者: 311阅读

如何取得GRE作文满分的理想成绩呢?参加GRE考试的考生,肯定都想取得GRE作文满分,为了帮助大家更好的准备GRE作文,下面就针对GRE满分的作文进行分析。   考生们都想取得GRE作文满分的成绩,可视却苦于找不到合适的方法。其实,获得满分除了要自己扎实地练习作文之外,参考一些优秀的GRE满分作文、借鉴其优秀的作文手法与作文思路也是很有必要的。下面是一位名师对GRE作文满分的指导分析,希望参加GRE考试的考生看后可以受到启发。   "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."   这个题目分析起来是说学术目的的。作为一个scholar/researcher应该考虑的是自己的感兴趣的领域所在而不是考虑是不是他们的研究成果是对整个大社会大环境有贡献的。这个题目第一眼看起来好象似乎是有理的,但是想到很多时候很多科学家的成果实际是无意义的。美国不是有一个搞笑诺贝尔奖吗?就是奖励类似的研究的。虽然也是科学成果但是根本就没有实际操作的价值或者对人类或者对社会根本就没有意义的。   但是这个contribution在某些时候也可以引申到名利方面。从这个方面来讲,这个题目是可以成立的。   对这个题目进行进一步的分析,可以看出来题目里面有一个比较,非常明显的比较,more来带出来的,所以我们可以说这个speaker的观点是很明显的表明了自己是支持哪个方面的。   Should academic scholars and researchers be free to pursue whatever avenues of inquiry and research that interest them, no matter how unusual or idiosyncratic, as the speaker asserts? Or should they strive instead to focus on those areas that are most likely to benit society?   拿问句来起头,来质疑。脱离出了一般的解释题目的开头。虽然不是特别特别,但是还是让人感觉比较的attractive。l strongly agree with the speaker, for three reasons.非常直白的陈述自己的观点,同意speaker的观点。   First of all,典型的连接词,开始陈述观点了。Who is to decide which areas of academic inquiry are worth while?又是一个问句,但是这个问句的作用和开篇的问句不同了,是引出来自己论证的第一个方面。Scholars cannot be lt to decide.自问自答。   Given a choice they will pursue their own idiosyncratic areas of interest, and it is highly unlikely that all scholars could reach a fully informed consensus as to what research areas would be most worthwhile. Nor can these decisions be lt to regulators and legislators, who would bring to bear their own quirky notions about what would be worthwhile, and whose susceptibility to influence renders them untrustworthy in any event.   两个否定句非常干净利索的说出作者的看法,没人有能力来决定什么是应该worth researching的。   Secondly, by human nature we are motivated to pursue those activities in which we excel. To compel scholars to focus only on certain areas would be to force many to waste their true talents. For example, imagine relegating today&aposs preeminent astrophysicist Stephen Hawking--霍金我想就不用介绍了吧-- to research the fectiveness of affirmative-action legislation in reducing workplace discrimination. Admittedly, this example borders on hyper(夸张法).Yet the aggregate fect of realistic cases would be to waste the intellectual talents of our world&aposs scholars and researchers. Moreover, lacking genuine interest or motivation, a scholar would be unlikely to contribute meaningfully to his or her "assigned" field of study.   这个部分举例说明了,如果把学者或者科学家局限于某个特定的领域内的话会也会局限其施展自己的talents,是资源的浪费。而缺少动力或者兴趣,人也无法完全发挥自己的talents用辨证的方法说出interest和contribution二者的关系。   Thirdly, it is "idiosyncratic" and "unusual" avenues of inquiry that lead to the greatest contributions to society. Avenues of intellectual and scientific inquiry that break no new ground amount to wasted time, talent, and other resources. History is laden with unusual claims by scholars and researchers that turned out stunningly significant--that the sun lies at the center of our universe, that time and space are relative concepts, that matter consists of discrete particles, that humans evolved from other life forms, to name a few. One current area of unusual research is terraforming--creating biological life and habitable atmospheres where none existed bore. This unusual research area does not immediately address society&aposs pressing social problems. Yet in the longer term it might be necessary to colonize other planets in order to ensure the survival of the human race; and after all, what could be a more significant contribution to society than preventing its extinction?   考生要想获得新GRE作文满分,不仅需要在平时多加练习作文,而且还要借鉴优秀的范文以及背诵模板与核心句型。希望本文的指导分析能够对您的GRE考试有所帮助。

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