雅思写作模板:女人应该参军吗?.

2017-08-07 作者: 216阅读

  这道雅思大作文题比较老,如果时间不允许,大家可以不做准备。下面是为大家提供的该题目的雅思写作模板,大家可以参考借鉴。

  Some countries allow women to join the army. Some other people think army doesn’t suit women. Do you agree or disagree? Please state your reasons.

  Agree: Firstly, modern wars are not as cruel as bore. Women will not face any danger because the decisive factor of modern wars is technology, not physique. Most females have received higher education and mastered advanced knowledge. They can serve in the army like men. Secondly, some occupations in the army are more suitable to females. For instance, most medical workers in the field hospitals are females because they are more patient and carul. They can give tender care to the wounded soldiers. Finally, females have played very important roles in wars in history. Females are good at coping with the unexpected events because they enjoy advantages over males psychologically.

  Sample writing:

  It is a strongly held beli that kitchen and laundry are for women and wars are for men. Even though women are allowed to join the army in some countries, most of them are far away from the frontier. However, as the application of high technology in the army accelerates, women’s participation in the army becomes not unusual.

  First and foremost, modern wars tend to be non-contagious with the filtration of science and technology. Thus, the dangers facing women will be reduced considerably. The development of new technology offers numerous opportunities to females because the decisive factor of modern wars is technology, not physique. Most women, just like their counterpart, have received higher education and mastered high technology. They have neither physical barrier nor technical obstacle to serve in the army.

  What’s more, some jobs can be better done by females rather than men in the army. For instance, many doctors and nurses in the field hospitals are females. Injury and death are inevitable in the battlield. In that case, females usually shoulder the responsibility to render medical service to the wounded since they are more patient and carul than males. The wounded soldiers can receive good medical care and recover soon.

  Last but not least, women played very important role in wars in history. Women enjoy much more advantages over males. For instance, females are calm when they meet with urgency. Their contributions in the wartime are notable.

  In bri, the role women soldiers play in the war cannot be underestimated. Women should be encouraged to join the army in modern time. For one thing, it is benicial to the army; for another, females can become more brave and respectable. (280 words)

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