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雅思写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思的一个重要材料,因为雅思写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面就是澳际小编整理的雅思写作范文:科技是否扩大了贫富差距。
雅思写作题目:
Would the range of technology available of individuals increase the gap of rich and poor? Discuss.
雅思写作范文:
Presently, many would vaunt the gap between the rich and poor, attributing such a gap to the thriving of modern technology.But some others would disputethis view. What lies between such arguments is the dinition of the word"gap",the cons and pros would argue from their points of view as follows:
The pros for such an idea come up with many examples , ranging from the internet stock exchange and mobile communication, they believe such methods of technology have broadenthe gap between the better-off and the poorer because they can add much faster to the wealthier&aposs fortune and less to the poor&aposs wallets.Examples of trillionaires are various from Bill Gates to some famous website owners, who are mostly related to the development of internet or communication. In this sense, the gap between them and the rest is increasing.
The cons stand still to their dinition of "gap". The gap of living standard between the poor and the rich is actually decreasing for the improvement of technology. In the past ,car owners are very much like showing off their status and wealth, the case was quite similar to the first generation of mobile phone owners.But when technology has overwhelmed such gap, we can see how popular cars and mobile phones are, they are no longer any symbolsof status. Another example is from the way that people travel, we used to take a train, but presently most people would prer to take a flight if the destination is quite far away.Such gap between the rich and poor is not as obvious as bore.
As my conclusion, I would say that such a dispute can reach no result due to the vagueness of topic, IELTS had better give some more clarifiedor common-based argument to share.
以上就是这篇关于科技是否扩大了贫富差距的雅思写作范文的全文,比较符合我们国家目前的国情,同时可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。
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