雅思写作范文:小孩子该学习竞争or合作?.

2017-08-07 作者: 242阅读

  雅思写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思的一个重要材料,因为雅思写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面就是澳际小编整理的雅思写作范文:小孩子该学习竞争or合作?

  Some people claim that children should learn how to compete in school while others believe that it is more sul to teach children how to co-operate. What&aposs your opinion?

  The contentious issue in the domain of sociology in the past mainly concentrated on competition and cooperation still has been steeped in controversy nowadays. The key point of it is, which factor has priority in children’s education. In my submission, they are not contradictory to each other. Not without either of them can children gain ground any more. Both of them are required.

  On one hand, competition is ubiquitous. It exists not only between individual but also between groups or community and is more and more furious. Brutal though it seems to be, it does stimulate our growth. Not to advance is to go back. Suffice it to say that how outstanding students become. It is because that, even if they have already got high marks, they often keep studying hard lest someone should catch up with them. Sense of competition prompts them to make progress unceasingly.

  On the other hand, cooperation is the approach to get ahead, as individual power is limited after all. Can one person build up the Great Wall? Obviously no. Modern pedagogy also emphasize on fostering children’s collaboration spirits. Take computer-supported cooperative work, groupware that is a type of software designed for groups and for communication, as an instance. Students are encouraged to accomplish systematically ordered instruction tasks by teamwork. During working together they can perceive their own weaknesses and other’s merits as well, which are virtual for them to go forwards.

  To sum up, competition and cooperation are inseparable and indispensable in children education. Without competition we will loosen demand to ourselves, meanwhile without cooperation we will achieve nothing. We should treat them in dialectical view. At the same time, as the competition among Chinese children are more fierce people are more likely negligible to cooperation. So, I slightly tilt towards cooperation.

  以上就是这篇关于小孩子该学习竞争还是合作的雅思写作范文的全文以,比较符合我们国家目前的国情,同时可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构,同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的,同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。

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