romanti飞跃的小小经验(5)--- PS的开头

2017-03-28 作者: 205阅读

通常把重点的事件或者精彩的段落等放在突出的位置-------首段,先声夺人。 [b]例1:精彩的观点 [b] In a humorous word, the relation between theoretical physics and applied [b]physics is somewhat like the relation between dating and marriage. [b]Theoretical physics is exciting and applied physics is practical but the [b]succeed of the latter needs a smart sense of the former one. What I gained [b]in PKU is just both the smart sense and the practical experience on space [b]plasma physics. [b] So what I want in your Plasma Physics Program is just a successful [b]marriage with plasma physics. [b] [b]例2:特别事件 [b] January 1, 2000 as usual, I was concentrating on debugging the computer [b]program and inspecting the instruments in the quiet laboratory. After a [b]bri examination, I switched the ignition power on. A dazzling ray of [b]laser flashed, while a distinct heating curve appeared on the screen. The [b]unfolding scene brought a satisfactory smile across the face of the elder [b]lady beside me. [b] [b]例3:名人警句 [b]It is difficult to say what is impossible, for the dream of yesterday is [b]the hope of today and the reality of tomorrow. [b] -----------Robert H. Goddurd [b]例4:(下面是攻读Design专业的PS,很有特色) [b]Two roads diverged in a wood, and I, I took the one less traveled by, [b]and that has made all the difference. [b]- Robert Frost- [b] [b]Have you ever taken the road less traveled? When you drive home from work, [b]do you ever explore? Sure, it might take longer than usual, and there may be [b]unpleasant stops along the way, but occasionally you will find an [b]unexpected surprise. By casting aside strict conventions and routines and [b]by taking risks, we can achieve things we never considered or thought [b]possible. [b] [b]例5:家庭影响 [b]I cherish my early family experience very much, for it shaped my [b]personality and my dream to be a successful scientist. It is my mother, a [b]scientist of agriculture, who stimulated my first interests in science. [b]例6:表明动机兴趣 [b] [b]In 1994,"Once you heard the song, you would never forget her...", this [b]piece of report set my life-long direction. Maqing an eight-year orphan [b]with her sweet sound moved everyone in the World Conference for the early- [b]ageing patients. According to the past cases, Maqing, my most favorite [b]singer, died after her populous concert. How I longed for lending her a [b]hand. Then I decided to become a doctor. However, in the next year, when [b]my dearest grandmother felt into ill which could not be healed in spite of [b]the advancement of Medicine, this disappointment propelled me to seek the [b]most original arcanum of lives--Biochemistry. I said to myself, "Lovely [b]Maqing, Dear Grandmother, just here, waiting for me, that is a promise." [b] [b]例7:表明动机兴趣 [b]Excited by the idea of becoming a scientist since I was a small child, my [b]in terests in pursuing graduate studies intensified during my undergraduate [b]education and my research experience. Rather than discouraging me with the [b]tremendous amount of work and demands for creativity, my college years [b]motivated me to earn a Ph.D. and to continue pursuing a career as a [b]research scientist. Although my exact research goals have yet to be [b]rined, my interests include studying the genetic basis of disease and the [b]genetic mechanisms that govern various [b] [b]例8:简明扼要型 [b]A familiar vigor grasped me the first time I read about Princeton 's [b]graduate program on microelectronics. I instantly realized what my next [b]destination is. [b]立即咨询

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