SAT官方满分范文之technology.

2017-08-05 作者: 264阅读

  这是一篇关于technology的SAT官方满分范文。这篇SAT满分范文的主要背景是科技承诺可以让我们的生活变得更简单,让我们有更多的时间来实现休闲上的需要。但是实际上从来没有停止过的科技新发明的快速步伐和电脑瞬间处理程序的能力让我们的生活更加的匆忙。现在我们只能接受这种原本是要让我们的生活更加简单的机械不间断的节奏,导致的后果就是无论是在工作和休息中,人们都不觉得生活变得更好了。

  Official Guide: Practice Test 2

  Technology promises to make our lives easier, freeing up time for leisure pursuits. But the rapid pace of technological innovation and the split second processing capabilities of computers that can work virtually nonstop have made all of us feel rushed. We have adopted the relentless pace of the very machines that were supposed to simplify our lives, with the result that, whether at work or play, people do not feel like their lives have changed for the better.

  Adapted from Karen Finucan, “Life in the Fast Lane”

  Assignment: Do changes that make our lives easier not necessarily make them better? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

  Sample Essay - Score of 6

  Throughout time mankind has strived to make his life easier. Whether it be through technology, science, or theories of social interaction every generation has made one contribution. From the idea of crop rotation to the cellular telephone mankind has advanced. It can be argued however, that not all of these advancements were benicial. Many times people are accused of “taking the easy way out”, something that is looked down upon in today’s society.

  Consider, if you will, ancient Grecian Society. With hardly any of the technological or scientific advancements we have today, they were able to produce some of the greatest thinkers of all time. Socrates and Plato still influence modern philosophical thought. In addition, these men were well versed in all disciplines. They were thinkers, mathematicians, writers, scientists, artists and much more. Examine some other great men in history. Leonardo Da Vinci was one of the greatest scientists and also one of the greatest artists of all time, he even invented and drew up early plans for the helicopter. These ancient men, without the technology and ease of life we have today, were able to produce some of the most prolific additions to human knowledge ever.

  Now let us examine some men from our time. Bill Gates, while adding immensely to the pleasures and ease of man’s life, did so only by forcully destroying many fledgling companies and completely undermining our capitalistic market place. Very very few men in our time are leaders in more than one discipline. There are no scientists/artists or writer/mathematicians. Men, while being able to more deeply delve into a discipline, are now restricted to it. I attribute this to technology. We now have a life outside of our work. A life with computers, cars, movies, and dinner with the family from across the country. Mankind can no longer devote himself to his work. He has his work life, and his home life. While a cell phone allows me to talk to anyone from anywhere, it prevents me from being alone and fully concentrating.

  While the internet allows me to look at websites from around the world, it prevents me from doing the work I set out to do. While technology and science have made man’s life easier, they have not made it better. Man has become less productive and less devoted, partly, as a result of this newfound ease of life. Therore, What makes our lives easier does not necessarily make them better.

  上面就是这篇SAT官方满分范文的全不内容,这篇SAT满分范文主要是描述让我们生活更加容易的改变是不是对于让他们变得更好来说很不必要这个问题。文章用在阅读,学习,经历和观察中得来的例子支持自己的观点。大家可以参考。

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