SAT高分作文查漏补缺.

2017-08-05 作者： 410阅读

　　SAT作文是可以查漏补缺来提高的分数。可是很多同学在SAT作文练习之后，不知道如何修改，对于SAT作文中出现的一些漏洞，也不知道如何修复。下面我们就来看看这篇高分作文是如何修改的。

　　SAT作文原稿

　　And[4] the mainstream science plays the very vital role to provide people with reasonable methods[5]. These science are based on practical experiments, carully analize and reasoning[6]. They may not seem as good as those nonmainstream areas in satisfying human needs, but under their artless face they give people real help.

　　语言修改

　　On the other hand, science plays the very vital role of providing people with reasoned[7] methods to conduct life. Science is based on practical experiments, carul analysis, and reasoning. They may not seem as miraculous as nonmainstream areas in satisfying human needs, but under their artless face they give people real help.

　　SAT作文内容点评及修改

　　这一段大问题跟前面类似，只是提出了主流的科学给人们提供合理的方法。这些科学是基于实验，仔细的分析和逻辑的方法的。它们看上去不如非主流的追求那样满足人们的追求，但是却能给人提供真正的帮助。这是作者的观点，但是没有具体说明科学是如何给人们提供合理的方法，缺乏真正能够支持论点的实例。下面的修改范例在内容上对原稿进行了补充。不仅提出科学不像那些迷信那样能够给人们提供奇迹的、不可思议的方法，但是在科学朴实的外表之下它能够给人们带来真正的帮助，并例举了

　　具体的科学门类所给人们提供的帮助。

　　SAT作文修改范例

　　On the other hand, the history of mankind has amply demonstrated that, science based on experiments and analysis, provide people with reasoned methods to conduct life. Psychology explains human behavior. Sociology enlightens people on their relationship with their surrounding environment. Modern medicine has advanced so much that it is now possible to predict cancer even bore a child is born.

　　由此可见，SAT作文的查漏补缺还是很重要的。被修改过后的作文内容读起来不仅语句通顺，也使得论述更加充实了。同学们在写作过程中要学会去其糟粕取其精华，把论点突出，这样SAT作文是很容易取得高分的。