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美国留学个人陈述是所有出国文件中最重要的部分,它是申请者最主要的自我包装。申请的过程就是要把自己推销给评审者的过程。由于美国大学很重视申请人的诚信问题,所以个人陈述最重要的一点就是要做到材料的真实性。
Sincerity(材料的真实性)
Don&apos&apost focus too heavily on what you think admissions officers want to see, at the expense of conveying your own message in your unique way. Be yourself rather than pretending to be the "ideal" applicant. Inundated with countless cliché-ridden essays, admissions committees respond very favorably to honesty. Don&apos&apost be afraid to reveal yourself. Admissions officers are interested in finding out about who you are, and they appreciate candor.
Sincerity is important to stress because it&apos&aposs hard for most of us to achieve, despite the fact that it seems so simple. The pressures and anxieties of the situation have locked us into a mindset that prevents us from writing honestly.
Further, because we are not used to writing about ourselves and being so close to the subject, we cannot assess the sincerity of our own writing.
Thousands of students every year will read this same advice, whether in a guidebook or even in the application instructions themselves, but they simply will not be able to put it into practice. If you can be one of the few who truly understand what it means to be sincere, then you will already have separated yourself from the pack in a crucial way.
You might question how a reader who doesn&apos&apost know you can judge your statement&apos&aposs sincerity. The basis for judgment usually lies in the context your reader has developed from reading hundreds or thousands of other essays. Assessing your essay against others is one essential area in which we can offer a more critical eye than your friends, relatives, or teachers who have not accumulated the expertise specific to the personal statement.
Moreover, our perspective in reading your essay is just as objective as your admissions reader&apos&aposs perspective will be.
用英语写作本来就是困难的事,更何况美国留学个人陈述是为了表现和包装自己,有违我们的文化习俗,所以写起来往往倍感吃力。中国申请者往往没有面谈的机会,因而这份文件愈发显得重要。
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