I know a man with confidence might not win, while a man without confidence must lose. I am person with confidence that is from solid foundation. My confidence and solid foundation have helped me make great days by gone. I will prove this with the following parts.

　　My foundation is intelligence, diligence, industriousness and serious study attitude, which are essential to a person who wants to be successful. As a young child, I got many competition certificates and got high scores in all kinds of mental test. I like thinking, especially logical illation, which supplies me a lot of fun. When I was seventeen, I watched a Hong Kong soap opera, in which a lawyer’s wonderful rebutment and precise illation made deep impression on me. From then on, I aimed to be an excellent lawyer. In order to realize my dream, I enrich my self by reading and thinking every day. I am eager to meet problems to enjoy the study process and the gladness brought by the settlement of problems. In my “mind dictionary”, there is no “mission impossible”, because my slogan is also “impossible is nothing”.

　　With my intelligence and diligence, I was registered in China University of xxx, the most famous and professional law university in China. At university, I further improved my research ability and practice ability. I spent three years completing all the courses which are supposed to be finished in four years, with overall GPA 3.6. Moreover, I got scholarship every year. I prepared TOFEL in my spare time and got high marks—650. According to what I have learned and thought, I wrote two papers this year, both published in national level magazine. In the papers, I separately discussed the necessity and moderation of self-dence in international law, and the legal features and nature of International Factoring. (I have translated these two papers into English and sent them together with other application materials. I hope they will be helpful for you to know more about my academic ability) What benited me most were not the papers but the process of writing. I earnestly dealt with each step, from consulting materials, fixing thesis, composition to how to clearly express my views and how to logically dissertate. I incessantly modified and polished them. Finally, the result proved me right—I was not only praised by my supervisor but also had the opportunity to publish them.

　　I actively participated in all kinds of academic communication activities organized by our university. Last summer, I stood out in strict written and oral examinations and took part in summer school held by xx College of xx University, as a representative of our university. Owning to my outstanding study performance, I got scholarship supplied by xx College. During one month of study, I realized the differences between Common Law and Civil Law as well as similarities. I patiently read cases, seriously listened to professors’ classes and attended seminars. In the end of program, I finished two papers about contract law and completed my courses successfully. This study experience makes me believe that I am able to acclimate myself to foreign study and living environment, which strengthens my confidence to study in the United States.

　　Besides study, I attach attention to practice. In my opinion, law is not only for learning, but also for use and the purpose of learning law is to use it. Therore, I cherish every opportunity to have internship. I followed my tutor to consulted materials, arranged cases, took part in the session and contacted parties in law firms and courts. In these internships, I experienced the work of a lawyer and judge; learned their strong work ability and responsible attitude; applied what I had learned into practice. From these experiences, I practiced my ability to use law as well as strengthened my understanding of theory. With solid coursework and serious attitude, I was praised many times in work units.

　　In order to improve my comprehensive ability, I took part in many social activities. I was hostess in TV station at our university and took charge of editing and scheming programs. During this time, I was graded as “excellent TV reporter” and “best hostess”. I once worked in public relations department of Students Union and succeeded in soliciting sponsorship many times; organized students to attend court hearings in local court; organized students to propagandize law and supply legal service for free; I also worked as a translator in University Foreign Affairs Office and translated a lot of materials about communication between our university and foreign universities. What’s more, I was champion in our province in Spoken English Contest held by Ministry of Education and Ministry of Culture…All these activities make me a person with outstanding performance in many respects besides study.

　　As the development of intercourse between China and foreign countries, we need more and more lawyers who are able to deal international cases in China. However, we extremely lack of this kind of persons. Therore, I hope to be an excellent lawyer who is adept at dealing with cases involving in China and western countries, which is also where my interest lies in. Chinese leader Chairman Mao once said, “If you want to know the flavor of pear, you must taste it by yourself.” I believe that to study western law in foreign countries is a fatal step for me to realize my dream. I am sure I am able to take this step well. I would be honored if I can study in your renowned university, this is quite important for my life planning and aim. Maybe at the moment I am not the best among the students who apply to your university, but I have enough intelligence, perseverance, confidence, potentials and improvement space, which are the reasons for you to select me. I am sure that it is not a repentant choice, which will be proved by my performance at your university.

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