写好雅思作文 每一个段落每一个句子都要仔细斟酌

2017-07-18 作者: 281阅读

摘要:出国留学雅思作文词句:一个段落就像一篇文章一样,也有主题句、扩展句和结尾句。主题句是段落的核心,但要记住,一个段落只有一个中心,这个中心要清晰地表达出来。扩展句围绕主题句进行叙述、说明或论述,方法各异;结尾句对本段的内容进行总结,和主题句相呼应,引发读者对段落的进一步认识;结尾句可有可无,视内容而定。

“麻雀虽小,五脏俱全”。一个段落就像一篇文章一样,也有主题句、扩展句和结尾句。主题句是段落的核心,但要记住,一个段落只有一个中心,这个中心要清晰地表达出来。扩展句围绕主题句进行叙述、说明或论述,方法各异;结尾句对本段的内容进行总结,和主题句相呼应,引发读者对段落的进一步认识;结尾句可有可无,视内容而定。

1.列举

常见的关联词有: first, second, finally; for one thing, for another thing; on one hand, on the other hand等,如:

Effective measures can be taken to protect our natural resources. On one hand, we should carry out campaigns to make people aware of the urgency of environmental protection; on the other hand, strict laws should be made to put the commercial fishing under control.

According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病.

2.举例

常见的关联词有: for example, for instance; one example is… , another example is…; such as 等,如:

Love means more to those who need help. For example, in 1998, southern China witnessed an unprecedented flood. Many people became homeless, and they were in bad need of clothing and food for the coming winter. At this moment, people all over China offered their warm hands. With their love, they help the victims of the flood live through the winter.

Nowadays ,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈.然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历.

Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great forts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful fects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响.

3.递进

常见的关联词有:furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, what's more等,如:

Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen. There are two reasons for this phenomenon. To begin with, they can meet the needs of manufactures. With the development of market economy, manufactures have to be more and more competitive, and advertising is one of the best ways to strengthen their competitive capacity. What's more, advertisements

are also necessary to consumers. Advertisements can help the consumers keep informed about different products and offer them different alternatives when they just stay at home.

An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive fects on construction of city .However ,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents ,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用.然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,象犯罪和卖淫.

4.因果

常见的关联词有:because, since, for, owing to, due to, as a result, because of, so, there fore, thus, consequently, accordingly等,如: .

At present, fake products are very common in our markets. The most obvious reason is that some dishonest manufactures want to make easy money, and selling fake products is their first choice. In addition, the government hasn't passed strict laws to punish these dishonest manufacturers. As a result, fake products are very popular in the market.

Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus ,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客.

5.比较和对比

常见的关联词有:on the contrary, in contrast, in comparison, on the other hand, likewise, while, whereas, yet, but, however等,如:

The entry into WTO has brought China many opportunities. For example, it will introduce into China more advanced technology, which is bound to stimulate the development our country. However, each coin has its two sides. After China became a member of WTO, it has also faced many challenges. A case in point is that some heavy industries are facing bankruptcy because of the pressure from the foreign rivals.

The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.

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