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题目
Telecommuting rers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of eachweek and communicating with their office using computer technology.Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for mostoffice workers in the coming decades.
How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?
分析
这是一篇谈论在家上班的议论文,题目的论述中谈到在家上班的含义及其不可阻挡的趋势,要求我们探讨其对当今社会的影响。毫无疑问,这是一个单边支持型的结构,即在引言段进行重述和表达观点以后,主体段落的任务就是一一陈述在家上班的趋势对社会造成的种种影响。
主体范文
The most obvious changes may be apparent in the normal offices ofcompanies, governments and other organizations. If even half the working week isspent telecommuting from home, then we would initially expect many desks in theoffice. As offices grow smaller, workers coming in for the day would be expectedto share with their absent colleagues. This, in turn, may affect the socialatmosphere of an organization, however, as less social contact with one’scolleagues could harm morale and loyalty.
(主体段落之第一段:阐述在家上班对于许多公司,政府和其他结构的办公室的影响,一是有空荡荡的感觉,二是对组织的凝聚力有破坏作用。)
For the individual office worker, telecommuting would mean spending moretime at home. For a parent with young children, this may be a blessing.Moreover, many telecommuters would be able to work the hours they wished, havinga nap in the afternoon, for example, but working some hours in the evening. Onesubstantial benit for all telecommuting workers is that there will be no needto travel to work, allowing more free time.
(主体段落之第二段:阐述在家上班对于职员个人的益处,一是他们可以有更多的时间照料家庭,二是工作时间可以自己随意安排,三是不必浪费时间在上下班的路上。)
The structure of urban life is also likely to be affected by telecommuting.We would expect to see fewer cars on the road during peak hours and, eventually,a smaller concentration of offices in cities’ central business districts. Inshort, people will have less reason to travel to city centers from outlyingareas. As more people work and live in the same location, shops and culturalevents will likely relocate themselves out of the city center.
(主体段落第三段:阐述在家上班对于城市生活结构的影响,一是高峰时段的路面交通的减少,二是城市中心商业区的规模的缩小,三是商业和文化将向城市外围迁移。)
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