雅思写作常见错误分析:综合性语言错误

2017-07-10 作者: 248阅读

本文收集整理了雅思写作常见错误分析:综合性语言错误。希望对大家的雅思备考有所帮助!

综合性语言错误(comprehensive misusage)

所谓综合性语言错误是指在雅思写作中除了上述10种错误外的诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等错误。如:

1. Today money to everyone is very importance, our’s cloths, live, eat, go etc.

分析:

“our”是人称代词的所有格形式,可以单独作形容词使用,没必要使用’s形式,而且后面应该跟名词。

改为:Today money to everyone is very important, for example, our eating, clothing, living, going ,etc.

了解了上述常见错误后,就带大家通过几篇考生的雅思范文,来深入了解这些错误发生的频率和改进这些错误后会给文章带来的质的改变:

例一:

Writing task 1 (Cambridge 1- page 51):

The diagram shows the process of collecting information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts in Australia Bureau of Meteorology. It can be clearly seen that information goes through three main stages until it can be broadcast. These stages are incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and finally, broadcast.

As it is shown in the diagram, first, information is gathered via satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. The information from satellite is transmitted to radar. Satellite, itself, takes photos. All the information provided by these three tools are integrated into satellite photos, radar screen, and synoptic charts. Then, they are analyzed and forecast. This information is sent to computers in order to prepare the broadcast. Finally, up-to-date information is broadcast via TV, radio, and recorded announcement.

In conclusion, the diagram shows that there are various stages in preparing and

broadcast of latest news on the weather and that radar has a fundamental role in gathering data. Also, the most comprehensive information is obtained from synoptic charts.

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