雅思写作范文:性格先天影响大or后天影响大

2017-07-10 作者: 341阅读

雅思写作众多题目中,其中一道常考的题为,我们出生时的一些特质对我们的人性和发展的影响大于后天的生活经验。分享的主要目的就是想让大家对这方面有一个初步的了解甚至是掌握,如果大家能对此加深认识,想必一定会为你的雅思考试增分不少。
Version111 Research indicates that the characteristics we were born with have much more influence on our personality and development than experiences we have had in our life. Which do you think is the major influence?

------------Argumentation平衡讨论的题目--------38+95+89+42=264 四部分共264个词

Introduction ( 38words)

Human's endeavor in researching on factors affecting one's personality and development has offered quite a amount of proofs. My position may provide you with a clear notion that nurture plays a far more important role in one's development.

Body 1 (95words)

Reportedly there was a maid, a countryside girl with only an educational background of primary school, working for an American professor who worked in Shanghai Jiaotong University, China. After two years of stay at the learned and exotic surroundings, amazingly this plain girl could speak fluent English and started to help the host to receive and send e-mails to his students. When the professor lt for New York later, soon she sought a post at a multinational firm. This example clearly reveals a common truth: appropriate nurture can turn an average person to be competent. (topic sentence)

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