雅思写作高分句型:转折句

2017-07-10 作者: 294阅读

1) In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/dects in A, people‘s second thought is to...

(e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.)

2) To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill fects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...

(e.g. To counter the undesirable fects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.)

3) In their forts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A h as brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution /course to...namely...

(e.g. In their forts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.)

4) In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/to ward the solution for the problem of...

(e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.)

5) So when it comes to an fective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.

(e.g. So when it comes to an fective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.)

6) But it has also brought along with it the negative fect/disadvantage /weakness that...

7) However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/dects, for example, ...

8) Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...

9) For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benits/positive fects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative fects.

10) To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.

1 根据上面提到的A的负面因素/不利因素/缺陷,人们另一个想法是…

例:根据上面提到的提高产量的负面因素,我们的另一个想法是提高产品质量。

2 为了对抗/抵消/取消A的不良/负面影响/结果,B被提出作为对…的另一个更好的做法/解决办法。

例:为了对抗管理僵化的不良影响,感情投资被提出作为商业成功的另一个更好的做法。

3 然而,人们努力对抗A所带来的负面/不和谐因素,提出了另一个方法/解决办法/做法…即…

例:为了努力消除考试教育带来的不良的一面,教育工作者对这一问题提出了另一途径,即素质教育。

4 与A的缺点相比,B对解决…的问题在正确的方向上更进了一步。

例:与核电的缺点相比,太阳能可作为更好的办法来解决能源问题。

5 当谈到对A的问题/局限/错误/弱点的有效补救/平衡,人们自然就想到了B。

例:因此当谈到竞争的坏处的有效补救时,人们自然就想到了合作。

6 但它也同时带来了…的负面效应/不利因素/弱点。

7 然而并非没有限制/问题/瑕疵/缺点,例如…

8 如同其他任何事物一样,它也有不好的一面,…就是明证。

9 尽管A具有优势/好处/正面效应,它却有一些坏处/危害/负面效应。

10 然而为了能达到这一目标,我们仍有很多工作要做/很多障碍要消除。

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