雅思写作Task1流程图考官范文(1)

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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown.

Sample Answer 1:

The given diagram shows the stages of manufacturing and process adjustment of the consumer goods. As is observed from the flow chart, the goods manufacturing is a complex process which is done in several stages and information is sometimes fed back to earlier stages to make some adjustments.

Firstly, raw materials and other components are stored together and production planning is done. There are two major process involves in the overall manufacturing process: one is manufacturing process itself and another one is the information feedback process with which the adjustment of the manufacturing is done. After the product research, the design part is done and this input is used in product planning stage. After the production planning is complete the assembly, inspection, testing and packaging stages are done sequentially. Feedback from testing phase is used in design stage and which led back to product planning stage. Again, the market research affects the design and advertising stages and inputs from the market research stage is used in packaging stage. The final two stages are dispatch and sales. The information flow stages gives feedback to other stages to rine and adjust the process.

In summary, the consumer goods manufacturing process involves both the multi-staged manufacturing and research methods. The manufacturing stages involve the storage, assembly, inspection, packing to the sales methods whereas the research stages include market product research, design and advertisement.

(Approximately 231 words)

Sample Answer 2:

The given diagram shows the steps of consumer products manufacturing process, as is clearly show in the diagram that goods manufacturing is a complex process from collection of raw materials to the end product.

As the process clearly shows the first stage of product development is collection and storage of raw materials and manufacturing components. The second stage is designing of the products and production planning and it’s a lengthy process which includes supervision and monitoring designing progress frequently, and bore market survey it is necessary to test the product to being aware the quality of the product. If the product is quality wise good then the next stage is packing of the products and make advertise for sale. In this production and manufacturing process there are mainly two types of process: flow of manufacturing process and flow of information feedback.

In summary, it is value chain development process that starts from collection of raw materials to the end or final product for sale, in each stage of this manufacturing process value is added to products.

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