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　　学生姓名:A同学

　　录取结果：

　　#2 Milton Academy米尔顿中学

　　#12 Choate Rosemary Hall乔特罗斯玛丽中学

　　#13 Middlesex School米德尔塞克斯中学

　　#20 Taft School塔夫特学校

　　毕业学校:International School in Beijing

　　GPA:4.0/4.0

　　TOEFL: N/A

　　SSAT: 93%

　　Interest兴趣: History and Golf历史和高尔夫

　　Activities 课外活动:

　　MUN Member模拟联合国成员

　　Art Charity Auction, Founder艺术慈善拍卖，创始人

　　ISB Golf Team (Varsity) ISB高尔夫球队（校队）

　　Results录取结果:

　　Choate 乔特罗斯玛丽中学

　　Milton米尔顿中学

　　Middlesex米德尔塞克斯中学

　　Taft塔夫特学校

　　Essay 申请文书: Student focused on describing her love of history and her personal connection to WWII through her grandfather.

　　学生专注于描述她对历史的热爱以及她通过她祖父建立的和二战的联系。

　　Counselor’s comments 顾问评语:

　　I could sense A’s excitement and enthusiasm for current events and history from the moment I met her. As we prepped for interviews, I would listen in wonder as she shared her thoughts on Eli Weisel’s book Night and articulated its affect on her own understanding of Nazism and World War II. She tied this to her own family history as she described her grandfather’s experience with the Japanese during the Second World War and the interest that this sparked in the Pacific Theater. This interest in the past also linked with her fascination with current events and understanding how history shaped our current understanding. Despite her articulate responses and clear interest in a range of subjects, Aoftens second guessed her essay ideas and written responses. We discussed extensively how to link these interests back to her personal story and perspective. We worked tirelessly on the one boarding school prompt that asked students to write their own obituary as we pieced together A’s divergent dreams of volunteering in a third world country, serving on the UN and winning a professional golf tournament. Watching A clarify her voice and streamline some of her goals was fun and rewarding to see. It all culminated in her acceptance to her dream school, Choate.

　　第一次跟Alice见面，我就可以感受到她对于历史学科以及历史事件对当今社会的影响所具有的热情和喜爱。在面谈的过程中，她向我娓娓道来她在阅读完艾丽?维塞尔的著作《夜》的感受，并阐述了这本书如何帮助她更好地理解纳粹主义和二战。同时，Alice还向我讲述了她祖父在二战时的遭遇，这也是她如此痴迷于历史事件的重要原因。在我看来，她十分热衷于研究历史上的重大事件，希望深入的理解当时的情景，而这种兴趣也帮助和指导她更加正确和客观地看待当今事物。由于Alice独特的学术兴趣和家庭背景，我们也将此作为她申请文书的核心部分，将她描述成一个对历史有浓厚兴趣，并且善于观察和思考古今事物的学生。在整个申请过程中，Alcie始终都能够很清晰地表达自己的看法和见解，这对于一个即将步入高中的学生来说非常难得。我想，正式由于Alice所表现出来的这些独特性，才帮助她成功被自己心仪的乔特罗斯玛丽中学录取。

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