雅思写作任务一(饼状图)

　　雅思写作部分第一个任务有可能要求考生分析图表，除了单个表格或者多个表格以外，最常见的就是各种图形，今天我们要和各位考生一起分析的就是饼状图。以下两个饼状图反映出了一个国家的民众在1920年和2000年两个时间点的家庭支出情况。

　　所以，第一段introduction部分要介绍清楚两图的信息。The two pie charts give information about household expenditure on goods and services in 1920 and 2000. It is obvious that there are some quite significant differences between the two charts.接下来，考生需要仔细地看两个图，题目给出的信息量很大，不能把每个消费类别和数据都写一遍，需要分主次。In 2000 most money was spent on recreation and other items (34.2%) whereas in 1920 it was on food, with recreation and other items accounting for just 7.7%. 一个句子首先分析出了两图的最大的区别，在1920年人们的家用支出中71.9%是消费在食品类别上，而到2000年食品消费降到了21.8%，人们花费了34.2%在休闲娱乐上，使其成为民众家庭支出中占最大比重的一项。继续分析，there is a great difference in terms of food expenditure between the two years. In 1920 nearly 72% of the total household budget went towards food, compared to only 22% in 2000.

　　There has been a notable increase in the amount of money spent on traveling and communications between the two dates. 这个句子最好用There be句型或者被动语态完成。In addition, the charts show a significant rise in the proportion of money spent on clothing in 2000 compared to 1920.

　　最后，总结一下两图的相似点。There are some similarities. For example, in both 1920 and 2000 the proportion of fuel and lighting expenditure was roughly the same.

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