Rochester 会计录取PS选段及解析

2016-05-27 作者： 1481阅读

Rochester 会计录取PS选段及解析

申请人：张同学
背景：美国某大学，会计专业，GPA：3.5/4.0, TOEFL: N/A, GMAT: 660
个人亮点：美国上的本科，有会计工作经历和一次银行实习经历
录取学校&专业：University of Rochester& MSAS

文书正文&解析：

选段一：学术背景

I am grateful the quality education I have received during my undergraduate studies in Suny-Buffalo. It not only provided me the fundamental theories in accounting but also with skills and knowledge relevant to many businesses. From case studies, I learned how to combine theory with practice; from reading accounting relevant books, I cultivated the sensitivity to the relationship between social development and accounting; from the past projects, I practiced my actual operation ability and strengthened the memory of knowledge, and all of those are essential to my future career.
解析：
前两句是整体来说学生本科阶段的优质教育和会计基本功扎实，顺便提了下学生的本科学校是：Suny-Buffalo，如果学校比较看重非美籍学生的在美学习背景的话这点还是有提示作用的。后半部分是从本科阶段课上的案例学习，课下会计类书籍阅读和所做过的项目中学到的东西。

选段二：工作和实习
In addition to academic life, I worked as an accountant in my father’s real estate company for one year. I mainly took charge of cash management and dealing with bank account. For the reason that I needed to know how a bigger company to run their business and learn their standard management method in the aspect of accounting, I applied an internship of China Citic bank. From the internship, I observed how accountants work and how they dividing the work and responsibilities. I also learned how to solve customers’ problems and give recommendation for their financing products. Moreover, I improved my business communication skills. Due to my careful attitude and good patient, my customers gave feedback with satisfaction. If my education in accounting has laid theoretical basis for my future career, then my past working experience has offered support in practical way for my future career.
解析：
首先，因为学生的长期目标是在将来要看开自己的会计事务所，所以在换工作上强调了一下辞去自家公司的工作去银行实习是为了开拓眼见看看大公司是如何操作和经营的，不仅解释了中间换工作的原因也以此来体现学生对自己的职业规划的明确性和计划性。
其次，此段后半部表述了一下工作期间学到的东西，除日常工作之外还注意到了公司的运营这个与初衷相吻合。最后，提了一下学生在工作期间的优秀表现来突出学生优点，这些都是之后工作学习必不可少的。